School

Jump over every hurdle.

''Felly, are you ready for school?" mom shouted from the kitchen. That was my first day of school. Excited to meet new friends, and, most importantly, have fun. I was quite shy back then. I remembered my first day as I noticed a girl with a shorter arm. Curious, I 'peeked' to see as she hid it away from everyone. She had no choice but to tell me her story.

I wasn't that clever as I got the position 14 in class.The year went on with not many friends sorrounding me.  But, in my second year, I tried to mixed in more as I made a regretful promise with Madeline to be her best friend forever. Little did I know about her. I did not be her best friend , though. And she didn't quite mind. So I went on with life searching for another best friend. 

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lauren123 #1
as everyone noticed, I updated this so quickly. So if you spot any errors or mistake ,tell me okays?
Francis #2
UMM...update pliz!! cant wait to noe wat happen after this!
Francis #3
woo hoo!!! ur first official srory eh??? :) i will support u n give u my opinions about it.
1) Great start but if u dont mind, make the chapter 1 longer ya..
2) The second chapter is much better than the first and i think it is easier to write than type so...i suggest you write if u cant finish this on the interner. notebooks are portable but the internet,well u dont have any devices that are able to acess to it so....GO ON N WRITE/TYPE!!!
U GO GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lauren123 #4
@iMaoPaddington thanks for waiting . hope you will enjoy the story. :D
iMaoPaddington #5
^^ I will wait.