He's kinda sweet

Fly away love

"LET MY BAG GO!! STOP IT!! " I screamed. The guy from the store hear me screaming and I run to the man and me and hit the man. the man falls on te ground. He gets up and hits the guy. They are fighting. The guy falls on the ground and I screamed and hit the man. the man falls too. the man gets up again and run away. I hold out my hand to the guy. the guy grabbed my hand and stand up. "are you okay?" I asked. "yeah I am okay, you? You still got your bag?" "I'm fine. I have still got my bag, I am only a little shocked..." We go back inside the store. He grabbed 2 stairs. "go sit down, I will make some tea" he said. I sit down on the chair and wait for him. Then he came back."HAHAHAHAHA " I LMAO! he came back wearing clothes from girls and a wig on.  The guy bows;"here is your tea" he said with a girly voice. I take the tea from him while laughing.

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The guy began to dance reaalllyy cute <3 I laughed so hard because he was so funny and sweet. He walks to me, grabbed my hands and pulls me up. He turns me around and I am dancing with him. I looked at the clock. "oh no, it is already this late? I should go home, i have to work tomorrow.." I said. "I will be right back, I will put on my own clothes and come back' he said back. "okay I will wait". The guy is back in 5 minutes. I walk to outside and the guy locked every door and closed the store. a few minutes later we walk together to my home. "What's your name? hehe.. We know each other but we don't know each others name..." I asked me. "My name is Irisa, Lee Irisa. What's your name?" "nice name :3 my name is SooMin, Park SooMin" "thanks hehe" "where do you work?" "I work at the town hall" ""okay" "But just because I want to buy a piano" "can you play the piano?" " a little :3 " "okay :3 "

we are at my home. "This is my house.. " "oke, sleep well" "you too, be careful on your way home. bye!" "bye" SooMin said and turned around. I opened the door. I turned around and saw him walking away. SooMin also turned around and smiled at me. I smiled back and waved to him. When he waved back I go inside my house and closed my door with a happy smile on my face. I make myself ready to go to sleep and go sleeping

 

 

~ the next day ~

I wake up. I slept wonderful. I make breakfast and turn the tv on. I hear something at the door. I stand up; "the newspaper is here~" I look through the window, it's a nice spring day. But what's that in front of my door? I open the door and see a packet in front of my doorway, with a card on it. I grab the packet and go back inside with it. I go sit down on the couch and take the card off and start reading: ' dear  Irisa, I hope you like this gift. Get ready on 12 PM. I will come to take you to a place. I won't tell you where we are going so don't ask me. with kind regards, SooMin~ ' I open my gift and scream happily. "AAAAAAAHH SO SWEET!!<3 It is the cute dress from yesterday!!" I saw it was already 11 o'clock  "oh no!" I ran upstairs and go shower, put the dress on, dry my hair, fix my make-up, brushing my teeth and go downstairs.

I was busy with doing a matching bow in my hair ((  )) and then I heared someone knocking on the door. I open the door. "hey :3" I said to SooMin. "hey, the dress fits you nice~ you look cute ;)" He said back. I blushed. "thanks, I am really happy with it. But I still want to know where are we going x3 " "you will know once you get there" "but-" "do your shoes on, we lose time!" SooMin cutted me off. I grabbed my shoes and put it on. I close the door behind me. "wait, you have to put this bandage on so you can't see where we are going" He said. "... Can I trust you? you won't do anything weird with me? " "I will just kidnap you that's all" he laughed and I laughed along with him. "but you can trust me I won't do anything :3 " he said. "okay" he puts the bandage on me and i can't see anything. We get into his car and we drive away. "we will go to my favourite place" He said. I just nodded. a ½ hour later we get out of his car. "watch out where you are walking :P " SooMin said. "YAH I have a bandage on, it hard to see where i am walking you know!" Soomin laughed; "I know" While SooMin holds me tight we are walking to the place. I had no idea where we are but it feels like we are in the woods or something and  it is really quite... I begin to panick. Where are we going? Was it a good idea to trust him just like that?

 

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hwaranni #1
Chapter 2: The characters are a little confusing but I'm glad that you thought of using different names for them because I've thought of doing that too. But I didn't do it. XD I'm just voicing out my opinion so if I state that I don't like something, don't feel bad, okay? So, 1st chapter, you should break the whole chapter into more paragraphs because you're not using any font and normally readers don't like reading long paragraphs. It's just like an essay, if you have messy handwriting and you didn't break your essay into paragraphs, the teacher wouldn't enjoy reading it. And I'm glad that you did that in the 2nd chapter. Oh, and your full stops and capital letters. After a full stop, the next letter must be a capital letter. If not, it would just look like you're not putting in effort to write this story nicely. Other than that, your story is good. ^^ I like it. And I shall press the subscribe button right away! Happy writing! I hope this helps you! Don't feel bad, okay? Because this is only from me, maybe other readers don't think the same. ;D
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@angie_xiong ; wait and you will see ~ :3
QueenGirl
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@angie_xiong I have updated another chapter ^^ I took so long because I have to translate everything again because I lost everything :( but it's still fun !