babyYoo thank you for comment, english is not my lenguage too, so sorry for the mistakes i promise improve, thank you so much

Hiiiii english is not my main language but as a fanfic reader I'd love to leave a comment about your fic here, also as a XiuHan shipper over here ^^
first you need to put quotation mark for every sentence that is being said, n the name of someone who said it after the sentences written.
example: "I am sorry Luhan" said Sehun.
I think that's all first. keep up the good work dude~! ^_^
peace out<3

please coment^^
help me to improve