Chapter 1: It's been a year. Will you still update this? :(

MsChoKyuhyun I'm trying to have kyu as a kind of bubbly character, he's new to the school and he's not trying to make any enemies (...heechul) LOL

Aww you guys thanks for the comments!! School is just pilingup and getting soooosososooo stressful but in 2 weeks when it's over i shall write my heart out <3

Hm, this is interesting so far... Your words flow very well, but I think everything happens too fast, not that fast.. but it seems Siwon met Kyuhyun a little too early-in my opinion. Kyuhyun also seems a bit out-of-character.. I find him acting bubbly, haha. When Siwon & Kyuhyun ran into each other, Kyuhyun wouldn't have apologized. He would've glared and thrown him a snarky remark.
This is your first story, eh? Well done! I like it & I'm impressed. I'm telling you my opinions & tips to help in improve your writing, which is still very impressive. I hope I did not offend you in any way at all.
Assassins you say? WELL, that's interesting, haha! XD Heechul, don't be mean to Kyuhyun!
I'm a week late on commenting! Sorry sorry~ I said I would be a loyal follower & a regular commenter, so that's what I'm trying to be, but school's getting in my way. Anyways, can't wait for another update!

OMO! HOW COULD HEECHUL DO THAT TO POOR KYU?! O.O
STAND UP FOR (your soon to be lover) SIWON!! PROTECT KYUUU~
I really like this story line!!^^ Can't wait for the next chapter~

update..update..update..hehehe..nice story!!

O_O whoa it seems interesting... subscribing ^^

UPDATE SOON! D: pleeeeease.

omo. this plot is daebak and unique. Cant wait to see an assassin won. Wonder what kyu is like ... 8D

Niiiiice.... Assassin Siwon, that got to be real HOT! Update soon, please...

woooaaa.. I agree with wubukyu!!!