Black mail benefits [Editing]

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Be careful with placing things on porper places, cause you'll never know...

Whether those things will end up positive or negative.

What if your LOVE LETTER got misplaced ? Will you let yourself fall for it instead ?

Foreword

Annyeong ~ 

So here's the fic that i've been working on now.

Cause it crossed my mind and i don't want the idea to pop away.

 

It's another idol X you fic.

Hope you enjoy reading~ ^^

 

Aegyuleader-

(used to be Dangerous Cyanide ♥)

DangerousCyanide
updating this fic as soon as i can > . < oh god college works is killing me

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xchessthebest
#1
Aw, Sungyeol's too sweet. :'))
Update soon!
Rini6189
#2
It is sweet of Sungyeol to be taking good care of Hyunae. Despite her denseness toward some things, Hyunae is aware of her true feelings. In a previous chapter, she did think to herself about wishing that Sungyeol returns the same love she has toward him. It's admirable of Sungyeol to finally pour out his heart to Hyunae. Being close to losing her seems to have opened his eyes and his heart to see how precious she is to him. This ought to give her something to think about while she lays down to rest. It should make her heart glad hearing the confession from him.

Some Ch. 40 mistakes:

No I'm okay.
Correction: Yes, I'm okay.

My heartbeat's went on a quicker phase.
Correction: My heart beated at a quicker pace.

I mumbled and looked at her, seeing her expression with confusement.
* It should be "confusion" instead of "confusement."

* Note: The pronoun "I" is capitalized no matter where it is in the sentence.
hwangyeonyeon #3
Awwww, Sungyeollie just confessed. ^-^
kevinian_0330
#4
SWEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!
update soon :))
jeslene140 #5
Kyaaaaah Please update soon >.<
Rini6189
#6
It's a good thing that Infinite arrived at the scene in time to come to her rescue. Sungyeol is so noble to dive after Hyunae to prevent her from drowning to death. This scene reminds me of a particular scene in "Ouran High School Host Club" where Tamaki dove after Haruhi right after she was pushed off a cliff. Just as much as Tamaki cares for Haruhi, Sungyeol is so deeply in love with Hyunae to the point that he can't bear to lose her. There's a difference between kissing and giving CPR. Sungyeol's just like a kid when he's jealous. He doesn't have to worry since Myungsoo already clarified before that he doesn't like Hyunae that way. If he does, he wouldn't have gone to all that trouble to help bring the two together. Myungsoo does make it obvious that he supports them as a couple. Hyunae said so herself a few chapters back that she's really into Sungyeol now. It's sweet of him to stay by her side when she's unconscious. The question remains about how they'd make A Pink pay for their actions.

Some Ch. 39 mistakes:

I jumped off the cliff and angled my self to fasten the falling speed.
Correction: I jumped off the cliff and angled myself to increase the falling speed.
* Fasten means to tightly secure something (i.e. a seatbelt).

Use mouth to mouth resiscitation Myungsoo.
Correction: Use mouth-to-mouth resuscitation, Myungsoo.

*It's spelled "unconscious."
kevinian_0330
#7
CHODING!!!!!! XDD
Y U SO SWEET XDD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON^^
xchessthebest
#8
Aw, Sungyeol's so cute when he's jealous. "Hyunae's mine! She's only mine!" Hahah.
I really wish she ended up with Myungsoo.. but a twist is good too. c:
hwangyeonyeon #9
Good Job! I likey this fiction. *Wiggles eyebrow.
Rini6189
#10
Hyunae is missing out on the fun by not joining the boys. Her inability to swim explains why she's reluctant to hit the water. She could benefit by taking swimming lessons from them. Sungyeol is considerate of her to not continue further because of her uneasiness. Infinite is worried about Hyunae's safety because A Pink's around to cause her harm. Despite their warnings, Hyunae must be worried about Sungyeol to not want to just sit around and do nothing. So, she decided to go out to look for him. A Pink is going too far by using Hyunae to threaten Infinite because of Sungyeol rejecting Namjoo. They're doing this to make Sungyeol regret his decision. It would mean big trouble for her since she can't swim. Hopefully, they'd get there to save Hyunae in time.

* Note: The pronoun "I" is capitalized no matter where it is in the sentence.

Some Ch. 38 mistakes:

Sungyeol was left dumbfounded and scratched his head, i chuckled on his expression.
Correction: Sungyeol was left dumbfounded and scratched his head. I chuckled at his expression.

"I'm going at the same room with noona!"
Correction: "I'm going to be in the same room with Noona!"

Sungyeol said and dragged me on the more deeper part.
* It should be "to" instead of "on."