...To Where It's Supposed To Be. (ON HOLD)

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Original Soundtracks:  Love's Way - SHINee and Obsession - SHINee

You can make a love song, but love is never a song.

Kim Saeri is just an innocent girl who doesn't want to know too much. She only wants to maintain her life as normal as it can be. And having to share her life with a not-so-normal guy is definitely NOT in her normal list. Can someone hate you just because of a kick in the shin?

Now she is torn between truth and desire. Doesn't love need passion? Doesn't love need honesty? Which one will she choose when what she knows and what she feels are not in sync?

Or more importantly, will love finally find its way to where it's supposed to be?

One thing for sure, do not trust your eyes.

 


It's originally a novel.

Ok, a half-finished novel.

It's meant to be a novel but I got stuck in the middle. Writer's block is a cliche, eh? cheeky  Anyway, it was in Indonesian but thanks to a friend here, I decided to translate it to English and post it here. Hopefully, I can continue it till the very end. I'm not good in grammar and structure so please be kind with me and point out any mistakes I made so I can fix it later.

SHINee is not being SHINee here. Onew, Jonghyun, Key, Minho, and Taemin are just your ordinary high schoolers. Thus, please disregard their real age cause Taemin is no longer the maknae and Onew is not even a leader here. cheeky

Also, I desperately need REVIEWS so I may know what is lacking in my story cause I don't think I'm making a good story, seeing I hardly get any comments. Sigh. So if you're willing to make me a review, I'd be beyond grateful. heart

Enjoy!

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Ray Gasan

Foreword

Something was not right with this place. The road was unusually quiet despite today was the first day of initiation. It was actually pretty noisy inside the school with the pranks and all there, but the road in front of it was just the opposite. And those faint sobs echoing all the way to where he stood right now could not help either.

‘Definitely not right.’ He thought eerily while looking around for the source of that sound. He stopped in the mid of his track when he spotted a tiny figure behind a tree, just a few steps away from him. Oh. It’s a she.

“Hey... Are you okay?” He decided to ask carefully.

“…. Hiks… Hiks…Why they—why were they so mean to me??”

“Huh? Mean? Who?”

The little girl pointed at the big building across the road.

“Chungdam Middle School? Oh, you’re a new student ther—”

“Huwaaa…!!!” More louder wailing escaped from that tiny girl’s lips.

“Wha—wait! Stop blubbering, will you!” The guy said while looking around frantically, afraid that someone might think he was the one who made her cry.

“I hate initiation!” She groaned in the middle of her now ceased crying.

He sighed audibly and decided to lean on the fence behind her. “You can say that again.”

“Huh?”

“You see that building back there?” He pointed over his shoulder with his thumb without looking back.

Her misty eyes trailed the way his finger pointed and indeed there was a huge building, much bigger than her school, behind the fence they were leaning on right now. She gawked at it absentmindedly. Why did she not notice that giant thing before? Had her eyes really gotten that bad?

“Cheong…sam High…,” she trailed off, trying really hard to read what was written on top of the massive main door leading to the inside of the school.

“Uh huh. An all-boys Cheongsam High School.”

“……… You’re ga—”

“I’M NOT!!! Going to an all-boys school doesn’t make you one!”       

“……… Touche.”

“Wha—” He looked at her incredulously. What exactly was this thing?? He initially felt pity for her but barely spoke and she already ticked him off.

“I’m a new student too,” he said through gritted teeth. “So I know exactly what you feel about initiation right now.”

“Then what are you doing here?”

“What are you doing here?” He looked down at her.

“……….”

“Exactly.”

“I’m not going back there!” She growled with a sullen glare at the innocent road. Poor thing.

“If I could, I would just do the same. It’s a shame we have to go through that horrible thing.” He shuddered at the thought of whatever had happened to him during the initiation just before he escaped from the school.

“Huh?” She looked at him questioningly.

All of a sudden he stood straight and dusted his pants, making her startle.

“Time’s up. Now go back to your ‘home sweet home’, thing! They’ll probably call the SAR team when they find out one of their supposed-to-be juniors missing.”

‘Thing? Thing??’

She tried to burn him into ashes with her cold stare but then scoffed in disgust when she failed. “As if.”

He looked down at her and stared long enough to make her feel uneasy.

“What?” She couldn’t take it anymore.

Instead of answering right away, he fished out for something in his pocket and, after a couple of seconds, brought out a marker in his hand. “Give me your hand,” he said.

“What for?” She immediately hid her hands behind her back and eyed him suspiciously.

“Don’t push me, thing. Just give me your hand,” he growled and reached for her right hand. At that time, she was already intimidated by the sudden change in his voice. That made it easier for him to do what he wanted to without any further fight.

“There!” He suddenly announced and flung her lifeless hand after a minute.

“What exactly is that?!” The girl gasped in horror while looking at the drawing at the back of her hand.

“A future idol’s sign,” he exclaimed in satisfaction. “Be grateful for that cause in two or three years later, it’ll be priceless.”

“Aish... More like a five year old’s scrawl,” she grunted while trying to erase it with her other hand in annoyance. “Conceited much?”

“Yah! What are yo—yah! Stop it before you regret it!”

“You’re much worse than those people.” She ignored him and kept erasing the drawing. Stupid idol and his permanent ink marker.

“You don’t even know me! Why would you say something like that? You barely graduated from elementary school! Aish.. Kids nowadays.”

“What??”

“Kid, you kiddo! No girls with a flat chest and that makes you A KID, you hear that!”

With that said, she kicked his shin with all her might, much to his dismay.

“Arghhh..!! What did yo—you little brat!” He cursed under his breath while jumping with only one foot. A broken shin was all he could think of right now.

Now it was her turn to dust her skirt and bowed 90 degree as elegant as she could to him.

“Annyeong.”

“Yah! Kiddo! Where are you going?!” He shouted full of irritation when she stalked away and left him in pain.

“Stupid ert.”

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x_T-AE #1
Okay, I know I missed out a lot and didn't explain the mistakes either, but I got lazy XD<br />
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‘Though I kept reassuring myself that one thing did not have anything to do with the other, I could not help but WONDER.’ It’s either ‘could not help wondering’ or that <-. Idk how to explain why it’s wrong :/<br />
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‘I was not the type TO WEAR make up on A daily basis so I just wiped MY FACE DRY with tissue and walked out of the restroom.’ Type is not really directed towards people only, so you shouldn’t put ‘who’.<br />
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‘He gave me a disapproving look but GESTURED me to take my seat anyway.’<br />
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‘My mouth was opened but no words came out of it. I JUST/SIMPLY pointed at him, looking more dumb than ever/ dumber than ever.’ For the last part, the 2nd one is more commonly used.<br />
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‘I was a little relieved to see Hyejin take a seat beside Yumi, leaving the seat to my right empty.’<br />
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‘I looked up, only to meet that Choi Minho’s gaze.’<br />
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“Choi Minho just transferred today. He’s your new classmate and please be kind TO him and help him in any possible way.”<br />
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‘Sure. When hell freezes over. Thrice.’<br />
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“How come you have more beautiful hair/hair more beautiful than MINE?” 2nd one more commonly used.<br />
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“Aside from my CURRENT dislike towards him,”<br />
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And I swore something was burst out across the room.<br />
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That was until a bolt of lightning struck from the sky and I dropped under the nearest tree.<br />
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I’d rather go back to sleep and dream about the life I wanted.<br />
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All I wanted to do now was sleep.<br />
RayGasan #2
@KimHana_Mina: Two chapters are already up =)<br />
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@BIGBANG369: Hahaha.. That makes me even feel honored! XD Two chapters for you!<br />
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@Karyne_O: Thank you!! Oh and I've sent you an e-mail. You must've got it by now~ =D<br />
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@x_T-AE: I LOVE THAT TOO! Hahahaha.. And no, he's still not my bias! =D<br />
YOU are, x_T-AE, YOU are~ =P<br />
Now, between Taemin moment and Key moment, which one do you like better? Hehehe..
x_T-AE #3
GAH, I love all your chapters so much!<br />
Sure, they're moving slowly, but there is just so MUCH 'FEEL' in every scene.<br />
I loved that part with Taemin!<br />
And though I have quite a lot of other favourite parts, I shall not list them all here. Just keep up the good work! You're like, way awesomer than me in writing, don't deny ;D
Karyne_O
#4
I've subscribed! & I'm willing to read/comment on every chapter as a part of the review/editing ordeal. ^^
BIGBANG369
#5
Yeaahh. I don't really comment. Actually, I rarely even go on this site. o.O<br />
Haha, no problem and once again, I really liked this chapter.
minionsbanana #6
updateeeee!
RayGasan #7
BIGBANG369: I'm sorry for making you wait too long. My computer crashed down and since my whole original story was stored there, I had to rewrite this chapter! TT^TT<br />
And thank you for the comment! That's your first comment, right? If so, I feel really honored.. XD<br />
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vikKiBeoMin: Hello there new reader! XD I'm really glad you've subscribed to my story. That really means a lot! I hope my story won't disappoint you... >_<~ Please keep supporting my story!
vikKiBeoMin #8
new reader!!! i love it!!<br />
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update soon!
BIGBANG369
#9
Whoa. I really liked this chapter and not to sound demanding or anything but please update soon? ^^ Haha, sorry but I really wanna know what happens next.
RayGasan #10
@x_T-AE: I won't say much about that~<br />
Ahahahahah...<br />
And I'm sorry I have to leave this site for a while. See you in March!<br />
xx