Chapter One Of S.S Girls :D

Shooting Stars Girl Group [Apply Closed]

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1st link is Mister By Kara

2nd link is Nu ABO By f(x)

Listen to any one of them while reading :)

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In the practice room Monday 6:00 am

"Neh, Girls! Tommorow we are going to do our first performance for our debut single at Music Bank...  So, SM Entertainment is practically introducing us as new k-pop rookies tommorow at noon.. By then everyone will know us and we won't have privacy anymore. So I suggest we do something fun today after practice..!", Lee Hae Rin yelled out to the other members of the group

"Yah... I think we should, Cause we all have been practicing everyday.. From 5:00 am till afternoon. We really need to take a break, before things get even harder..", Park Yurii stated

Lee Samantha nodded softly and said,"Yah.. I agree with both of you... I mean 5:00 am till afternoon? We have been doing that same routine every single day, since a year ago!"

Lee Sangmi started jumping up and down,"YAY! We are going to take a break!"

Chin Hae Sun started giggling,"haha.. Sangmi unnie! your funny! but I can see why your so excited..we never took a break for once.. Since last year, not even a day"

Ayra started smiling as she said,"I have a feeling we are gonna have a great day today"

"Ayra Unnie, You are so positive~!!!..",said Choi Kyon Shin as she huggled Ayra softly

"ahhhh..~!!!!! I am... tired....",Soo Rin said cutely as she laid on the floor crawling around like a worm

"WAHH!!! FI-NA-LLY! WE HAVE A BREAK! IM TIRED!", Lee Minhyun yelled as she laid down on the floor tapping her feet

Nicole smiled softly then looked over to Lee Hae Rin who was standing in the middle of the room,"Hae Rin-Ah! where are we going to go after practice?"

Lee Minhyun then sat up quickly,"Yah!! where are we gonna go??"

Lee Hae Rin whispered to Chi YiRin,"I don't think I should say it out loud Lee Minhyun Unnie will freak..."

Chi YiRin started to laugh,"HAHA! I know what your talking about..." She looked at Minhyun and sighed with a smile

All of the girls then started looking at Minhyun

Lee Tae Mi asked questioningly,"Are we going to the amusement park?"

Lee Minhyun eyes quickly widened

Hwang Sohee knew what was coming next so she covered her ears and mouthed an,'OH! NO!"

Lee Hae Rin nodded while she and everyone had covered there ears...

Then Suddenly,"YESSSS!!!!!!!!!!11 WOOOOTTTT!!!! OMG!!!!! HAHA YESSS!!!!"Minhyun yelled happily while jumping up & down

Sun Joong sighed,"Sometimes you being a singer with a loud voice isn't very helpful to us...Unnie.. are you really older than us?",she teased

Minhyun looked at Sun Joong,"NEH! WHUT DID U SAY"

Sun Joong softly laughed as she looked away

Lee Hae Rin said in a calm tone,"BUT! We still have to practice it's 5:21 am... Sooo we should leave at about 2 o'clock"

All the girls nodded they didn't complain, because they all knew why they are there for and their working hard for their dreams..

"Okay Let's Start.. Remember Girls! Do your best... and concenrate, We must not mess up on our first impression tommorow",Lee Hae Rin said with a serious face

All the girls had gotten into there position

Soo Rin ran to the stereo and pressed play then she ran to the camera and pressed record, and as fast as she could she ran back to her position

As the track played a steady beat the girls danced to it with simple moves.. then suddenly the music started to get faster

The girls moves suddenly changed into dynamic complicated moves

Each of them sang there part of the song with beautiful voices echoing loudly in the room

In the instrumental part each of the 14 girls one by one went to the front of the room and displayed a dance move of there own

as the song continued there moves got even complicated as they moved swiftly to each point they hit each move with passion still singing loudly they didn't look like they lost a breath, they had changed into positions without bumping into each other. No Mistakes AT ALL.. they were at perfection and it was always the same even though they did more than 10 times. And after the song ended they would watch the video to see if they can make things better. That's how hard working they were.

By the time it was 1:30 pm the girls had rehearsed the song about 34 times and they were all sitting down sharing vegetables and fruits and drinking water..

Chin Hae Sun smiled softly while eating her strawberries,"I think we improved alot!"

Sangmi smiled at the maknae and said,"I think we did..."

"Of Coarse we did, We all did.. We worked really hard to get where were at right now..But we couldn't have done it without encouragement from our leader,"Yurii smiled looking at Lee Hae Rin who kept replaying the camera watching every member closely

Ayra said softly,"Ummm... Hae Rin Unnie.. I don't think you should go close to the camera screen like that..."

Lee Tae Mi yelled,"Neh! Hae Rin-ah! ur gonna get blind~!!"

Lee Hae Rin had a mini spazz attack,"OH! ahh.. sorry.. and Yurii..it's not because of me that we are who we are right now..It's because of you all.. you guys worked so hard, you all have goals that  you wanna achieve so you try your best with your head held high.. All of you think that your only one person in this world... but you all..are the world to me....", Lee Hae Rin softly smiling..

Everyone was quiet..

Chi YiRin and Nicole both yelled out,".... GROUP HUG!!!..."

By the time a second past all the girls were in a bundle of hugs.. they looked close not as friends or team mates more like family..

2:04 pm at the Amusement Park

Minhyun parked the car nearest to the Amusement Park entrance,"WE ARE HERE!!! :D"

All the girls quickly got out of the van that they all were squished in

When they made inside they were all so amazed at all the rides and food stands

Hwang Sohee yelled,"Neh Neh! Mi Sun Joong Unnie!!! I wanna go eat ice cream..~!!!!!"

"oohhh~~~!!! can I have ice cream too..~???", Ayra asked cutely

Mi Sun Joong looked at both dongsaengs and sighed,"aiiishhh... alright then...What Flavor?"

"Unnie... c-can I have ice cream too?..."Chin Hae Sun said shyly

Mi Sun Joong thought to herself *Do they have to act SOOO cute to ask me...?? Do I even have enough money ._."*

Hae Rin came up to Sun Joong and whispered,"I'll help pay Unnie..."

Sun Joong sighed in relief...,"Thank you Rinnie"

"Guys lets go buy some ice cream :)", Hae Rin yelled

All the little chingu's ran to the ice cream stand but suddenly a group of boys had ran infront of them

"...How rude of them..", Soo Rin pouted

"Well... that's very gentlemen like...",Kyon Shin said sarcasticly

A boy with auburn hair turned to see the group of girls and was sorta shocked and asked,"Um... did we.. cut you..?"

Hae Rin said,"Yah.. you guys did... well whatever we can wait..."

"YAH!... WE WERE HERE FIRST!!!"Park Yurii yelled

A guy with purple highlights turned around with an arrogant look,"Well.. I never knew first was second... You can wait ya know..."

"YAH! Key! That's not how you speak to women!!!",Another guy yelled a bit irritated

"Sorry Onew... I kind of pissy since that other guy had bumped me into the waterslide earlier..."Key said apoligeticly

Lee Sangmi looked at Key and said,"I think you should be apoligizing to us too..."

Key sighed and bowed to the girls and said,"I truly am sorry.. I just couldn't hold my anger.."

Hwang Sohee smiled a bit softly and shyly said,"Don't worry everyone has those mistakes.."

Key smiled back at Sohee and for an apoligy the boys had bought ice cream for all the girls :)

Then the amusement park day continues next chapter cause I'm tired.. I THINK ALL OF YOU KNOW WHO WE BUMPED INTO.. :) SEE YA NEXT CHAPTER! sorry if it's short It's night time and I'm sleepy .... good night chingu's!! and sweet dreams

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kimminseok96 #1
Hahahahahahahaha xD this is a really good idea xD really creative Author-nim ^-^
MishiHeartsYuu
#2
Bah. I barely go on my other account,
This is Sangmi Unnies new account haha ^ ^ ;
TheGoldenLotus
#3
Haha, this is funny! And dramatic! I can't believe there's like 14 girls in this fanfic.. Isn't it hard? Keep at it okay?! HWAITING! 8D
-sugar
#4
oh did u forget my character's related to Kim Hyun Joong I'm sorry my names a little messed up. i meant to type Mi Sun Hyun Joong.Hes the leader of SS501. (:\<br />
-_Mi Sun Hyun Joong Unnie_-<br />
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-sugar
#5
i loved it! <br />
I espically love the part where i said <br />
"Whats in it for me?"<br />
"A new electric guitar."<br />
I smirked.<br />
ahhaha.<br />
oh that was awesome!<br />
xD Fighting Sun Joong Unnie!~<br />
RuzakiHatsune
#6
LOL, I'll make sure I fix that. Thank you for telling me, and thank you for the support. : )
chicken_onew
#7
omgawd! that was incredible~ i miss my taeminnie. hehe :]<br />
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sorry to bother you dongsaeng but um... there's a few mistake.<br />
''RING~~~!!! RING~~~~!!!!"<br />
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"Oh, Ayra your phone is ringing", Yurii pointed to her glowing pocket<br />
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She took her phone out and smiled, "Oh thanks, ...Oh~! Hyung! How are you?"<br />
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"Ayra, Your hyung has to tell you a secret..." <br />
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can you change the hyung to oppa? since ayra's a girl and siwon is older than her, she should be calling him oppa. hyung is for younger boy to older boy. hehe<br />
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and this too ---> Siwon hyung?<br />
icecreamiizx3 #8
YEAH IM COVERED BECAUSEE IM LAZEHHH ;D ~<br />
Well welcome back :) !!<br />
i STILL love the story <3
AyraLovesKibum #9
yay! update! :D<br />
btw, the model i used was park hyun sun :)
samazing
#10
Updatee!! Yayyy!! :)<br />