Odonata [Wings and Fins Contest Entry]

Description

He stopped flapping his wings for a moment and just hovered in the air. For a brief moment, he hung still. Then a warm updraft rushed under his wings, lifting him higher, higher, higher into the sky.

He folded his wings and plummeted towards the ground…

Something had helped him out of the water, carrying him high above the sea. For the brief moment before he’d been shaken awake, he’d been floating in air, not in water…

“Zhou Mi?” Ryeowook asked hesitantly. “Can people fly?”

Foreword

Hey everyone, this is a story for the Wings and Fins contest! (as it says in the title...) Here is the link to that awesome contest: 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/145325/wings-and-fins-a-super-junior-writing-contest-40-cash-prize-contest-donghae-eunhae-hanchul-kyuhyun-superjunior-wingsandfins

It is judged by Kevinosaur and ChangDictator, both of whom are extremely gifted and talented writers who make me feel bad about imposing my work on them. Oh well. Here goes nothing! 


Kingdom: Animalia

Phylum: Arthropoda

Class: Insecta

Order: Odonata- the order of dragonflies

Dragonflies have inhabited the earth for three million years and were, for a while, considered to be descendants of dragons. They are simultaneously signs of purity and of witchcraft. They are called both a good luck charm, and the Devil’s Needle. They are known all over the world as symbols of maturity, opening one’s eyes to the real world. They grant the ability to live life without regrets; they bless humans with power and poise.

And so they are the only hope of freedom for those who have lost everything…

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chocolakay #1
Chapter 5: can i write no comment here? (just kidding)

this is seriously amazing, you kill ryeowook, and make him go insane. ah. i'm speechless.
infinitytimesfive #2
Wow. This was amazing. Really great read. Why are my sentences so short?
Your use of science into this story totally excited the bio nerd in me. :D Western blots, go~~
I really liked Heechul here. Even though he's apparently a figment of Ryeowook's imagination.
Poor Ryeowook, though! He's so innocent and cute in your story... and the way he dies is just horrible! TT_TT
I normally support stem cell research, but this is seriously terrible. Implanting wings in young mice and enjoying their suffering-- Yesung, why? Don't be an evil scientist... you give science a bad name! x_x
The part with Kyuhyun was very depressing. Ryeowook's once-best friend... :(
Just wondering, did Ryeowook's wings ever sprout at all? I know at the end, he doesn't have wings, but are there any negative consequences of Yesung's surgery (aside from the fact that it causes Ryeowook to delude himself into thinking he has wings ;___;)?
forchenteller
#3
This is awesome. I just...

Wow.

I've been looking at the entries for this contest, and there are so man amazing ones, but this one has the most creative, original interpretation.

But, um, question? I thought dragonflies couldn't walk? Their legs can move inwards to catch prey while they fly, but can't walk.
Cuiminqi
#4
Seriously i never regretted subscribing it. Seriously. Its almost as deep as what i am studying for lit this year! *le prints and annotate necessary parts* gonna. Take. Forever. seriously.
swabluu
#5
Um.
Well.
Since I need to do my hw right now, I will now commence to give a proper review of this story. Yup. :D

So...first of all, I really, really, REALLY loved the plot. Everything fitted together so perfectly...it's so genius and I would NEVER be able to think up of something like that EVER .__.
And your descriptions are absolutely ASFDHGJGSAGHDHGF. Especially the part when Kyu and Wookie talk. It left a really deep impression on me--how Kyuhyun's nervous around Ryeowook, and how he dribbles that soccer ball--it's written so perfectly and the flow is so perfect and awesome and it actually makes sense and it reads out so smoothly and feels so natural ahjhgfdgsahsfgdhh.
My only complaint is that Heechul swore too much. It's not because I'm a person who can't stand reading the f word every other word (which I can't), but I feel like the way Heechul spoke was a bit of an overexaggeration. I can see that if Heehcul was Wookie's suppressed imagination (his subconscious desire to swear? :/ Idk. Too much Freud research TT__TT), then he would be swearing a lot, but the fact that Heenim swears so much is a little over the top and kind of drives away the point.
Other than that...the characterizations, the plot, the emotion, the flow...AGJSDAFGAF IT'S TOO PERFECT. AHHHHHHH.
/worships
Min-Hyo
#6
As expected from Author-Sshi, another amazing story ^_^ If I were the judge, then you would win for sure :D I just loved the way you portrayed Siwon, it's really rare to see him written like that. You know so much about science and crap :P
swabluu
#7
*to cry
swabluu
#8
OHMAIGOSH
/dead
...
this is
absolutely
freaking
genius
ohmaigosh
...
my chances of winning this contest used to be 0%. After reading this story, they're now -1234364%.
godlygodlygodlyholycrapwhyareyousogood
/goes off the cry
strawberrymyeolchi
#9
what the actual . i feel like i'm looking into the brain of a genius. apparently i need to get away from my OTP fics more often, because suju or otherwise, this is a ing brilliant plot. it's hard to find original plots with such a wealth of FF writers, so the fact that this storyline is already mindblowing and that it's paired with your fantastic writing...asdlfksjdlfaisd.
I was almost hoping you'd have a bit o the story dedicated to how it's Yesung's fault for taking advantage of a delusional minor, but at the same time, what an ending...Ryeowook was the perfect choice in terms of casting.