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Carnations [ H I A T U S ]

Jia droped the plastic bags she was holding, making all the food in it scattered in the empty street.

She fell on her . "Omona!"

Jia quickly crouched and started to pick up the cans, not noticing Jay's presence.

Jay, being a gentleman he is, started to help Jia in picking up the foods, until both of them picked the bottle of pickles. 

He looked at the girl he just bumped into and stared at her flustered, exotic beauty. He has never seen any girl so beautiful as her. And her eyes. Oh her eyes were such a beauty. It sparkles like....like a diamond. He felt his heart pounding, racing behind/above his chest.

She looked at his fiery, but sad eyes. She liked the way his eyes looked so fierce and shocked at the same time. Their eyes met each other. Her heart skipped a beat. 

They stared each other for a minute, until they heard a bike's bell passing behind Jay. Both of them stood up and Jia cleared and somewhat yelled at him, with 'the ahjumma accent'. 

"Y-Yah, are you blind or something?! Lucky for you, nothing's broken!"

She placed her hands at her hips, waiting for him to reply and of course, trying to avoid his gaze.

Jay bowed a bit;

"Mianhe. I have eyes, but I didn't see you."

He bowed again then asked her if she was okay. 

"Yeah, I'm fine.." 

"Let me help you with those."

Jay tried to take the plastic bags that Jia was holding, but she refused and said: 

"It's okay, I can handle this." 

Jay smiled and took the plastic bags then said:

"Oh c'mon, it's the least I can do after bumping you~" 

Jia slightly smiled back and started to walk.

Jay silently walked beside her. 

Jay was dying to know this "beastful" -- no, she was beautiful -- this beautiful woman's name. But he can't bring himself to ask her. His heart was pounding too loud, making him feel deaf. He feels so stupid.

How can he be so weak to ask a girl's name? 

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(Jay's P.O.V)

She made a sudden turn and said: "We're here."

I panicked a bit, I don't know why, but I did. She took the keys from her pocket and opened the door.

She went in first, and before she entered their house, she looked at me, slightly smiled and signaled me to come in.

I gulped and entered their house. The first thing I saw as I went inside were 2 girls sitting infront of the tv, one was fanning herself angrily and the other was focused on watching. The girl with the fan shouted;

"Suzy! Where's Jia unnie?! She was with you right??"

"I think I now know why I panicked."

"Ne~ I speed walked, so I came home first. Idk where she is."

I startled when the girl with the long hair suddenly shouted;

"Ah, Jia unnie! You're here!"

"Jia. So, Jia is her name. Such a beautiful name, like a diamond. It suits her so well, since her eyes sparkles. Jia..."

I didn't notice I was lost in trance when the girl with the long hair's hands was waving at my face.

I snapped myself out and bowed. She giggled and introduced herself;

"Hiya! I'm Suzy~ and you are...?"

Before I could say anything, Jia shouted from somewhere and said:

"He's my manservant." 

Suzy looked at me with questionable eyes. I quickly explained myself;

"I accidentally bumped her and she dropped these, and so I helped her... Oh and I'm Jay btw, Jay Park. Nice to meet you too Suzy~"

I bowed at her and smiled.

Suzy took the plastic bags from me, smiled and said

"Annyeong~ You can take a seat over there with Min unnie and Fei unnie."

She pointed the girl with the fan then the one who's watching tv. Min and Fei.

"Nice names, but Jia is just different..."

I bowed at her again and went to Min and Fei and as I approached them, I introduced myself.

Both of them stood up and introduced themselves too;

"Hi! My name is Min and this is Fei~"

"Annyeong Jay! Uhmmm, were you with Jia?"

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Done! Like I said earlier, this story will be put on hiatus for a while because I'm too bitter to write anything sweet. asdfghj And I re-arranged everything~ ;;

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Skibop #1
Chapter 6: This crackship is really random lol but I like the plot :)
annabelle7
#2
Chapter 9: Wow, i love the whole idea about carnation..... so beautiful and meaningful
LindsayG #3
AH ! Chapter 7 has my gif !! HAHAHA *jumps of hapiness* .. still gonna read chapter 7 though !! haha good job with this story :DD
abcdezza
#4
@greenarbovirus Thanks! :D I'll update as fast as I can~ ^^
greenarbovirus #5
Wow thanks pal
Love it so for..keep it up!
Hope to see new update
abcdezza
#6
I changed some of the titles btw~ haha. :D
abcdezza
#7
@sonotattractive you like it? :D Oh I am veeeeery open to any sorts of suggestions. Hmm well I'm also thinking if I should write any s. Maybe mild ? idk OTL Thanks for the suggestion! ^^
abcdezza
#8
@Geoul_ since the day you said I was your pie <33 OTL