Freeze [Hiatus]

Description

it's a temporary title but if I won't be able to find something that would suit it better then I'll stick to it... I'm planning on using all of Block B's songs as inspiration for the chapters so this might just be a short fic... and I'm also thinking on whether I would use the first person POV or I'll just stick to the third person POV what do you guys think? since I'm kind of used to writing in third person but I want to try something different... anyway it's my first time writing something that would be related to gangs and the like so expect that it's not really good... 

Foreword

 

My boyfriend for almost three years just broke up with me. I was crying my heart out while walking home after our meeting which was already the last. He said he lost his love for me, is that even possible? What did I do for him to lose interest in me?

I didn’t really pay attention to where I was going since my mind was occupied with our break up. It really hurts especially since I really love him. I was brought back to reality when I realized that I was in a dark alley and I heard someone whistle. I searched the place to see where that person is but the alley was dark and only the lamp post at the end was visible.

I stood still when I saw a shadow approaching me, there were three shadows to be exact I focused my eyes on them to see their faces but it was no use.

“What’s a beautiful girl like you doing at a place like this? Are you lost?” the man said, I’m already shaking in fear but I found his voice very attractive but of course I know better than to just stay still. Out of instinct I ran and I could hear them shouting for me to come back but I didn’t dare look back to know that they were following me.

I ran and I was almost out of the alley when a man stood in front of me. I didn’t really see his face clearly since the light was behind him blinding my sight but I caught a glimpse of his blonde hair. “Help” I said to him catching my breath, I’m not really a runner and so it’s just normal for me to lose my breath easily. After that I don’t know what happened I suddenly felt pain and my eyes slowly closed blacking out everything.

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I think chapter 2 is a total random chapter...

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ayyaira
#1
new reaaadeaaaahhh
what what who got her ??????
continueeeeeeeh ~ lol
n_faqihi #2
OOO first comment...
Good first chapter :D Although took me a while to notice that you changed POV in the middle, overall good.
Can't wait for the second chapter.