It's my first fanfiction (Oneshot) that would be published - I really want you to tell me what's wrong and what I have to still work on :)

I'm sorry for eventual mistakes - for orginal it was written in my national language - Polish and I had to translate it to put it there - I don't speak engilsh like SUPER WELL so I'm sorry once again ^^

It's about Kwon Jiyong from BIGBANG Park Bom from 2NE1 and a girlfriend of Jiyong that I made up - something not really nice happens to them ...