I simply love you

Description

Hey, this is my first story, so please go easy on me. I know it may not be very good, but it's the very first thing I've ever written and I feel very anxious sharing it. Please comment and subscribe, and tell me what do you think of my story ^^

P.S I'm thinking of making a sequel but it depends of the comments I get. n_n

I'm sorry if there are any mistakes, english is not my mother language.

Foreword

It was 3 pmand I still couldn’t take my eyes off Kibum’s picture. He was perfect, everything I could ever wish for. Stylish black hair with hot pink highlights, deep brown eyes and perfect body… But one day he just disappeared.

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shawol81025
#1
Chapter 1: Uhhhh... i need a sequel... poor JongHyun... and Key? Where are you?
But still love this~!
love_HyukieOppa
#2
Awwwwwwwww i want more..!!! But its so good.!! <33 Love it.;(
Bright5
#3
I NEED A SEQUEL!!
imadv0123
#4
What happened?? o_O
taemspenus #5
Confused.....
Sequel please.
yvzutea
#6
hgslhghjgfjhfsdlhflagljgsghajlhdga SEQUELLLLLLLLLLL
im seriously hurt my shoulder and its so hard to type but i just want you to know thatr i need sequel NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kaiwings
#7
Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!Sequel!!! Jebal!!!
youxme #8
SEQUEL!!!! YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!!! what happened to my bias? i wanna noe~~~ PLEASE write a sequel!
YuuChanJR
#9
7 Months...? I feel so sorry for Jjongie. Since I don't know what happened to Kibum, I can't say if I feel sorry but it must be hard on him too. I'd like to know what happened to Kibum but on the other hand I'm a bit scared. Anyway, your story was great. (:
phiiee #10
OH MY-
Dude, if you don't make a sequel out of this, I'd totally hunt you down.
I'm serious.
Do it.