Empty Beds [WINGS AND FINS CONTEST ENTRY]

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“Donghae?” He looked up to see Jungsu peering at him from the other side of the room. He pointed at his own face. Donghae furrowed his brow. What was he trying to say this time?

“You…” Donghae raised an eyebrow. Jungsu sighed, and leant over to wipe Donghae’s face.

“You were crying.” He said softly. The younger man’s hand immediately sprang to his eyes and found that his face was covered in tears.

“It’s ok Donghae.” Jungsu moved around to the other side of the table to embrace the now sobbing man.

“It’s ok.”

 

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“Hyukjae!” Donghae panted as he ran up the hill; one of the many disadvantages of having short legs was that it made you slow.

He reached the top and stood, panting, with his hands on his knees. The other boy laughed, filling the air with his childish cackle.

“You look like an old man! What’s wrong with you?” Donghae frowned at the remark, and pushed Hyukjae in the small of the back.

“Shut up! You’re so mean!” Hyukjae stuck his tongue out at Donghae.

“Who cares? You’re here now aren’t you?” The two boys argued as they made their way along the path to Donghae’s house.

Foreword

OK, so this is the second story I have written for Wings&Fins (the first one turned out far too long)

Link to the Compettion page here

It. is. VERY. angsty. (My friend killed me for writing it actually)

WARNING

Character death!

Image Credit japarathrum on Flickr

It is about the death of a loved one, it is a oneshot...

It's AU

Just read it yeah? :3

Oh and commenting gives you super powers

Really ;)

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nomnomninja
#1
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Why did I just read this again?
You're killing me.

How was your date today? ;)
forchenteller
#2
Howww could you dooooo this to meeeee?!

You meaner >:(

...ahem.

Um, I really like the layout on this. Usually I'd criticize an author for playing around with sizes in their writing, but this really worked for you.

And Donghae's loss of /everything/ - you captured that essence beautifully :)

But I'm still mad at you for the angst >.>
Strawberry_Princess
#3
I was on air. Then I died. Then I came back to life again at the end. Kudos my friend. This was beautifully written.
Qblank #4
THEY WERE A-MARRIED. AAAAW MY POOR SHIPPER HEART.

What a gorgeously sad ending. Oh Hae. Here's to hoping you'll find Hyukkie again in the afterlife T_T

The wingsandfins tag is convenient! Now I can just browse through this keyword for high-quality sj fics...YES.
swabluu
#5
Angstyangstyangsty
Why is everyone writing about eunhae for the contest .___.
Do I get a superpower now? :D
DBSJSHINeEXO
#6
THIS IS SO SAD THAT IT'S BEAUTIFUL T^T