Pain recedes

Chiao's Notebook

I can't sleep.

I envision you crying

And it makes me weep.

 

The pain you feel

My pain mirrors

And both pains are real.

 

The lump in my throat

Reveals more than my words.

I wish they were easier to emote.

 

When I can, I will try.

When the lump has dissolved,

If it's a day late, it's not a lie.

 

Timing is important.

Mistakes will be made.

They shall be flagrant.

 

But when all is said

And all is done,

Needing to clear our head,

 

We take a day of rest.

Maybe two or three.

Maybe this is the best.

 

When pain goes away,

We reconvene

And in the end, it's just a

 

Brand new day.

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C_a_r_o_LL
#1
this story is awesome!!!
KauType #2
Chapter 25: Tea is no Substitute makes me think. Was Chiao thinking of Hong Hua or of Carol when she wrote this one? Maybe the lines were even blurred? Both girls left Chiao. Though her girlfriend left in "slumber" by her own death, Carol left when Chiao was kind of sleeping-ish, right? Sniffle, can I hug Chiao now?
soupah #3
Chapter 24: Yes! New Chapter! More HongHua. Always HongHua. Poor Chiao :(
soupah #4
Will you be updating this with new entires any time soon?
therries #5
Whaaat?? Naughty deleted scenes?!?? Lol you've got my attention! XD I can't wait to read that! I'll be reading the rest of your stories in the meantime. I love your writing! <3
missterious
#6
@therries thanks so much! welllll i dunno if you read rated fics but there IS a rated offshoot in the works. basically the so-called 'deleted scenes' that i decided to leave out to have the fic rating more nc17/pg than xxx :) so if that's something you might enjoy, stay tuned!! and chiao's notebook is ongoing, so you'll still be able to be in chiao's head for a while ;)
therries #7
I just finished Nerds, Dorks and Jerks <3 I love that you continued on with this offshoot of Chiao's Notebook! It was nice to see her perspective and emotions during certain events in the main story. I wish it didn't end though!!! lol I would have happily just kept reading chapter after chapter X3