Right Before Your Eyes

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"I want to be with you forever. I want to kiss you forever. I want to be there for you forever. I want to be the one to get down on one knee and I want to be the one to give you my last name. I want to hold your hand while you're giving birth to our child, and I want be the one to sing our baby to sleep. I want to build a house with you and I want to sit on our porch, rocking back and forth, with you, forever. I want so much for us..."

 

We all get a little lonely sometimes, but we shouldn't fill that loneliness with just anyone—only someone who's fully qualified deserves a place in your heart, right? Only Mr. Perfect is worthy, right?

You have a list of the laws of love—-actually, it's more like a list of requirements, which detail just exactly who can qualify to be your boyfriend. Your best friend, Kim Kibum, will help you find the perfect man who fits the list, but as more and more men fail, you begin to lose hope. What will it take to make you see that love is, simply, right before your eyes? 

And not only are you and Kibum struggling through this manhunt, but your search is constantly interrupted by the pain of your mysterious shared past which haunts you both endlessly. But, at the same time, neither of you can bring yourselves to talk about it.

 

What's bothering you and Kibum? Where is this list even from? And out of all the men he finds for you, who will be the right one?

 

Read more and find out ;DDD 

Foreword

So yeah. I love Super Junior, and Kibum has recently been sneaking his way up my bias list ^^;; But as I dug through AFF to satisfy my Kibum craving, I realized there weren't enough Kibum/You fics out there. And even if this isn't strictly Kibum/You, I figured a story with the protagonist being Kibum really needed to be written >.< This is for you, my fellow Kibum fans! I understand your pain!

 

Also, I'm going to try and stick to their real personalities as much as possible. Of course, I have no idea what they're all really like, but I've been watching their shows very carefully to try and gauge their habits, pet peeves, reactions, behavior, etc, because I want this to be realistic, as if each Kibum fan who's reading my story is actually spending time with him. 'Cause isn't that what AFF is for, us delusional fan girls? XD I'm trying to make the setting realistic as well, so I did some research on the Korean education system and some culture haha but hi, I'm American, so if something is wrong in that sense, please do correct me!

 

I just realized this sounds very Kibum-centric. And it is! But to my fellow ELFs, K-pop lovers, and people who are just looking for something to read, this is, all-in-all, a romantic story about a girl who's lost her way in love. Other Super Junior members will prominently feature in here as well, namely Henry, Siwon, and Eunhyuk, and a surprise character who shall remain unnamed until he's revealed in the plot. In addition to SJ, SMTown members will also make appearances, to fill in every space for characters. 

 

I also planned this fic very carefully. I know exactly what's going to happen, how it's going to end, who's ending up with who. I only fill in the minor details and add a few ideas as I go along. As much as I'd love to please my readers, sadly, I will not be changint any couples or plotlines no matter how much it drives you guys crazy XD Oh! and about updates: I will definitely try to get a new chapter out every week. Thanks for sticking with me!

 

Also, there will be some cursing and slight uality (nothing graphic) in the story, so be warned!

 

Criticsm and fangirling and love and hate are all welcome! I love to make friends and I love my readers<333 Even the haters! I'd be delighted with a poster, if anyone wants to make it :D But most importantly, please comment and subscribe!

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Moon2519 #1
Update?
immssimple12
#2
Author-ssi... What happened to Kibum and I's story? :(
soowon #3
Chapter 31: such a shame for me to discover this story just now. it's such a genuinely awesome story!
shawol-elf
#4
Chapter 31: Reread this story... again! And cried again too! Wahh this is still the best kibum fanfic I've ever read! I know you're busy with college, but please, when you find some free time, come back to this story!!! It's been so long and I can't wait to see how this story wraps up. Thank you!!!
doublebusta14 #5
Chapter 31: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH

UPDATE!!! FINISH IT!!! I SEE WHAT YOURE DOING ON FACEBOOK FOOL SO DONT TRY GETTING IUT IF THIS ONE!!!!

AAAAHHHHH
lilike182
#6
Chapter 31: Oooooh an update ^^ Somehow I expected the confrontation with Hyukjae to be, I dunno, uglier? lol. I really hope Kibum heard what she said about him *.* My favourite part was when everyone went to visit Kibum, it was so cute of them *.* Keep up the good work! ^^
ch3nya #7
Chapter 31: :O did he wake up and he better have heard everything!!!
immssimple12
#8
Chapter 31: OMG KIBUM BABES IS WAKING UP!!! <3
sunkissedpeach
#9
Chapter 31: YAY YOU UPDATED AND YAY HE WOKE UP.
<3 <3 <3 This is so beautifulllll. I missed this story ;w; <3 Eunhyuk will find someone else ofc <3 <3
shawol-elf
#10
Chapter 31: HE WOKE UP!!! YAY! Haha, I was so happy that you updated! This chapter was sweet, even though I felt bad for Eunhyuk. But I ship Kibum-Narrator, so oh well! Update again soon please! Or whenever you can, cuz I know how much school , haha. I'll be sad when this ends. Ok, this comment is getting long. Bye bye! ^^