*hello ppl! this is my 3rd fanfic so hope u enjoy it*

Ur POV (english)

*cry* "guys it hurts!" i said my voice filled with hurt

"uljima maknae, umma is here" vi said hugging me

"maknae dnt cry, he's not worth it, let him go to hell u r way better without him" aly said

"yea hes a jerk i have no idea what i saw in him, i mean no one has an idea of what they saw in him" Mary said

"well he's sweet, smart funny, charis-" i said getting cut off by liz

"hun, not the point" liz said

"come on, u dnt wanna look sad before you leave for seoul" cam said

"yea and remember DO NOT FALL TOO HARD FOR GUYS!" cassidy said

"i kno i kno, i learned my lesson" i said

"thts good now come on we gotta go meet the other girls and ur kuyas in an hour" liz said

"i will bring my nun chucks in case those pabos try and bring HIM to where we r meeting" vi said

"eonni, dnt" i said

"finee well come on" vi said

....

"oh my god, rach r u ok?!" kara said

"how u hanging in kid?" yzzy said

"the pain will stop soon enough, dnt worry" franzel said

"especially when u see all of those cute idols" kara said teasing me

"hey she's too young" jr said

"aw seriously kara" nathan said

"ate, i just got out of a relationship and now ur telling me to go find another one?" i said

"sry so tell us everyting" Kara said

"ok well we were walking to the place where we had our first date: at the beach and then he kissed me and said i love u but i cnt go on like this, he said tht he found another girl he likes and dumped me, i stayed crying there until ray found me, i said thanks and asked him to drive me home...then tht man called me to say i'm sorry, to move on and to find a guy better thn him and thn he txted me a pic of his new girlfriends and it was jenifer! my worst enemy!" i started crying again

"oh my baby sister :(" kara said and then hugged me

"u really liked jeremiah didnt u" jr said patting my head

"yea kuya, he was my first crush" i said

"dnt worry, u'll get over him" yzzy said

"hey vi, didja bring ur nun chucks? i did" cassidy said

"minji!! i told u so!!" vi complained [Hello, Hello] my phone rang and i looked at the caller ID, only the diva's ringtone is like tht

(Korean)

"yeobosayo?" i said

"hey hey hey chingu!" key said

"KYAAA KEY!!!" i said

"how u doin" he asked

"honestly umma, not well" i said

"well honey, tell umma everything" key said

"arasso (tells story)" i said

"omo, minji, i am here for u" he said

"i kno umma" i said

"key, who r u talking to?" onew said

"oh its minji" he said

"cho minji?" onew asked

"minji noona?" taemin said

"duh!!!" key said

"KYAA!!! minji, let me talk to her" jonghyun said

"annyeonghaseyo shinee oppas and dongsaeng" i said

"we miss u noona!" taemin said

"saranghae-yo minji" minho said

"cnt wait to see u in 2 days minji-ah" onew said

"aish! dnt talk to her yet, she just got her heart broken" key said

"AHH!! UMMA!!" i whined

"yah! whos the guy, us, exo, and suju will kill him" minho said

"dnt worry minho-ssi the girls will handle it, oh and this is vi, liz, mary, and aly, we r her group members" they said

"oh annyeonghaseyo, wait we remember u guys, annyeong!! still i will help u kill him" minho said

"minho oppa dnt its jeremiah" i said

"bwo? chincha? but how?" jonghyun said

"dnt worry honey, i'll tell them later and also ur other chingus and kai" key said

"arasso but plz dnt tell suju oppas about this especially kyuhyun oppa, i dnt want him to worry about me too much, i gtg guys, tell them i will see them soon annyeong" i said

"annyeong minji!" the 4 said

"annyeong noona!" taemin said

(english)

liz, mary, vi, and aly were staring at me with worry

"y dnt u just tell ur kyu oppa" liz said

"i'll tell him when we get there" i said reassuring them

"ok but always be careful" mary said

"i kno and i have u guys to watch out for me" i said

"of course, u r our maknae so we have to" aly said

"nothing could make me let u get ur heart broken again" vi said

"u guys should finish packing" yzzy said

"ok bye we will meet u tmrw at our house" i said

"bring ur swimsuits" liz said

"yea we r going to the water park" mary said

"come early like at 10am we will b there a long time" aly said

"no him" vi said

"kk we goin to ur house now tho rite" franzel said

"yea" liz said

"keep strong little sis" jr said

"wait r u done packing?" nathan asked

"yea y?" i said

"y dnt u come with ur two kuyas somewhere" nathan said

"eonnis" i said looking at the 4 of them

"its ok go ahead we will meet u at home" vi said

....

"where r u taking me?" i asked

"oh just wait" nathan said

"wh-YOU!" i said using my death glare at him

"hey what's up?" jeremiah said

"what's wrong rachel?" jennifer said clutching jeremiah's arm. i then gave her a death glare

"nathan bro, this was a bad idea" jr said

"y" nathan asked

"she's getting ready to jujitsu karate taikwondo kick him, remember she is a black belt in all of them" jr said

"rachel stop" ray said

"no, let me kick him and his girlfriend's out" i said giving a death glare to ray

"sis, stay innocent for ur debut, u r the maknae" jr said

"shut the up kuya" i glared at him next

"she only swears when she's pissed" jeremiah said and i slapped him and his girlfriend

"goodbye es" i said then ran towards my house with tears in my eyes

"rachel wait!!! nathan this is ur fault!" jr said

"i was only trying to make them have good terms" nathan said

"after they broke up?!?! UGH!! U REALLY CAN BE STUPID SOMETIMES!!" jr said

*sorry for some of the language, anyway how u like it?"