It has this soft sort of romanticism that I adore...I particularly liked this line "There was no need to fight for dominance, because they were equal." Ofcourse I looked at it as Kyusung and I loved the word play...it is something I really want to do as well as you. Unnie this was beautiful :)
btw...Update the Kyusung!! I want to see what happens next...lol

Your style is very different from my non existent one, put your work is compelling and emotional. I think I describe where you emote.I love it!!...Its a friendship that they share right? Unless I am interpreting it wrong...I am sorta weird..lol...
I hope you continue. I want to read more :)