Bullseye

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He tried to fight the burning tears in his eyes as he had the gun raised forwards, holding it shakingly with both hands as it was pointed at her chest. His heart was beating faster than ever before but it felt like it was about to break in a million pieces. Their eyes connected like the always did and it felt like she could see right into his heart and mind. Her own eyes begging him to stop this. To lower the gun. And he wished she knew how much he wanted to. How much this very moment had already scarred his heart.

“Cheolyong… Please…” her voice was weak and cracked under the tension of her fear as he spotted the silvery crystals escape from the corners of her eyes. How did he end up in this position? How did he end up having to raise the gun at the girl who stole his heart, the girl he was dying to protect. They had been through so much already, was it really supposed to end like this.

His hands still shaking in front of him, he bit his lip. He knew what was at stake. He had to choose between the life of one and the life of another. If he spared on it would take the other. He had to make the decision now.

“I-I’m sorry…” he whispered, his voice hoarse as he closed his eyes for a second and let a single tear escape from the corner of his eye. Then he heard the echoing sound of a gunshot, a bullet zooming through the air and eventually hit it’s destination as the wind carried the sound of the gun through the air to the heavens above. 

Foreword

Mir is known as the joker. The innocent maknae. The farmer-doll. His family owns nine mountains of land. It's safe to say that this boy came from a rather well-off family. But money didn't always come easily for the young idol. And that is how he got himself involved with one of the most dangerous organisations in Asia...

She had a rough childhood. Her mother died when she was little and watching her father slip through her fingers out of desperation. And she had to make the bravest and most mature choice at such a very young age. All in order to save the remainders of her family, getting herself involved with oneof the most dangerous organisations in Asia...

Their paths cross. Danger is watching from a distance. How will this end?

Poster made by me.

First reviewed by the wonderful 8symmetrical8 over at Sparkling Jewels! Thanks!

Second review by the amazing criticism over at Efflorescence! THANK YOU!  

Trailer made by the amazing elenawtf over at Almighty Graphics! THANK YOU SO MUCH <3

 

 

 

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JigsawPuzzle48
Finally got around to updating Bullseye ^o^
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KStoryWriterx #1
Hello! Keep up the good work. n_nb
n_faqihi #2
Really curious about how Mir borrowed the money...ugh Chul Moo what does that cow want now?
n_faqihi #3
This is one of my favourite fics I'm reading right now :D
I think the plot is really original, can't wait for more!
OH LORD what is gonna happen next?
Keep the updates coming (:
sofiaissocoollike #4
She seems so cold.. but i'm sure in the end Mir will get through to her and she will love him back..or at least, that's what i'm hoping for.. kekeke ^-^
stanleyunique #5
oh dag . that bastard trashed the apartment ?! he is so sneaky - so annoying ! but OH NO ! She let information leak ! -___- gah . she definitely screwed up . if push comes to shove, she'll have to pretend like she saw the message when she looked over his shoulder . yeah , she could lie about that . now Mir is going to get completely suspicious - and . . . now things are quickly turning bad ! -__- but . I can already see that maybe . . . SooYoung is falling for Mir


Yay , I've caught up ! <3
stanleyunique #6
so she was being followed . UGH ! I definitely HATE Chul Moo ! gah . he is so annoying and irrelevant ! he is too cocky for his own good and I hope he gets what he deserves . how did he hear the conversation between SooYoung and her "father" and IS HE STALKING THEM ?! ugh ! how does he know whenever they're out together . he enjoys his job a little too much and deserves to get the crap smacked out of him -__- gah . he is so annoying !

I think that is so sweet for Mir to be concerned for her and for him to have some innuendo . he KNOWS he wanted to take her for coffee anyways ! haha . as in a "date" . haha . he is just so cute . go ahead . . . tell her how you feel
stanleyunique #7
Aw . Mir immediately wanted to protect SooYoung - but he was so nervous . Seriously. Chul Moo is definitely an . he really is . -__- and I don't like him. He has nothing to be cocky over - as though he is the best . he better get to stepping ! I love how the tension between Mir and SooYoung has technically been ended . I can see that they are both very happy to be around one another and somewhat , it's a little easier for them even during this entire . . . situation =)) . wow . your writing just gets better and better . I just hope that there doesn't have to be any bloodshed . anytime soon . or EVER . but we all know it's coming . and hopefully . . . it isn't Mir.
stanleyunique #8
wow . this chapter was really suspenseful. I was so nervous for Mir ! I'm glad he wasn't supposed to be roughed up or anything like that. And I just love how SooYoung is quick to answer things on her feet. I would have definitely got caught when questioned about that, so, bravo! haha . In the end of the chapter, I see that the two, in a weird way, are starting to actually...you know--get along a little more. They're laughing together and the mood is less tense than before . so, I'm happy with that. hmm ? let's see how this will turn out. He definitely got to come up with the money - but, if he knew exactly that he was supposed to pay the Mafia back one way or another - he should have been saving up all these ten years in order for him to save up (sure it would have looked suspicious) but, at the same time, at least her wouldn't be... DEAD!
I loved this chapter and I also love your writing style (if I haven't told you before . keep up the good work =))
stanleyunique #9
Aw . I just feel so bad for Mir. I mean, to have his life threatened non-stop .. . .. especially with the Mafia ?! gah . that's just . . . well , that's just AWFUL ! I just hope that it doesn't have to get . . . deadly . . . anytime soon . And no , you take your sweet time . you don't have to rush on the story AT ALL . Besides, it lets us know a little more about each person - I know I won't mind you having hundreds of chapters =)) <3 On to the next chapter (I'm trying to catch up)
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