onew my gawjuss boy

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hi this is my second fic i think i improved LOL. onew here is taemin boyfriend but he violate him. then onew and taemin got break up. onew want to go back to taemin it so sad but happy at the end please read and comment.

Foreword

 

onew look in da mirror and rolld up his skirt he lookd GAWJUSS. Taemin cam in and said Onew you so amazing it mak me cry btw onew still a boy in this but him and taemin are gay then they went to a club nd tae got drunk and they went home and do so onew told all his friends about it. tae got mad nd he cried cos it made him crayz. then he go on facebook and mak status sayin he aint a . everyone commant cuz he usually only post status about fillosooferr (i speeled that rong) stuff. omgggggg said jonghyun wat is up wit tae did he go violated by onew hyung yeobo saranghae onew say yes i violate taemin he probably like it but jonghyun hyung yeobo saranghae said NO you still goin to jail but onew know him and tae are cutest couple evah even though tae got mad so onew call him and say tae i thought you love me and tae say i think i love you but i still mad at you you did a bad thing and it hurt me onew. then taemin find comfort in his friend minho noona who say taemin you need a boy who treat you right and tae say yeah but onew is GAWJUSS but he treat me like im meat like a piece of beef or something. meanwhile onew drive over to minho house cuz he knows where minho lived and he see minho and minho punch him like boof and say hyung oppa yeobo saranghae how do you do that to taemin he is so cute like a mushroom and he think you are GAWJUSS. onew cry and hold his nose and say ow mminho that hurt i know that i should care more about taemin and i dont want taemin to be sad and hate me he didnt realise taemin were being stood behind him and he said onew i dont ever hate you youre so mazing it mak me cry. taemin and onew cry and hug and make up and then they love each other very much. 
the end.
 
omg guys if you put this in google translate or vozme then itll read it in such a sad voice btw it mak you cry!! please comment it make me better. english isn't my first language btw im from texas.

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DubuMushroomLOVE
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OMG i'm laughing out lot,sorry ur story is good really.But your english is bad.I can help u as well ;)