16.

Dance To the Melody

This is fully in Eunhee's POV


 

I dropped down on the floor, trying to control my sobbing and my heart that was beating uncontrollably. Myungsoo never did once raise his voice at me; I guessed that he’s really mad at me…

It was almost scary seeing that side of him. I shivered as his stern voice echoed in my head and remembering those cold eyes of his. He was right; I should’ve put more effort into dancing if I really want to improve. Myungsoo had been patient with me all this time and I should’ve been more thankful of him. If it weren’t for him, I would still be searching for a partner by now.

I pulled my knees up to my chest and rested my head on it, sobbing again. I felt so guilty…

Then I faintly heard someone opened the door. I kept my head down not bothering to look up as I heard footsteps approaching me. I didn’t want anyone to see this tear stained face of mine.

I sensed the person sat next to me but they didn’t say anything. We stayed like that for a couple of minutes until my sobbing died down. Then I felt a hand on my shoulder.

“Here,” the person softly said. I recognized that voice.

I peeked up to see what was being offered and a cough came out instead of laughter when I saw that it was a blue Pororo handkerchief.  I know that he sometimes acts like a child but I didn’t know he would have these things.

I took the handkerchief and covered my face with it, wiping away the excess tears and blew out my nose.

“Thanks Sungyeol…” I murmured, slightly smiling.

“You’re welcome Eunhee. When Myungsoo came back from dance practice earlier than expected and seeing that cold expression plastered on his face, I knew that there’ll be someone in need of a cheer up,” he explained while tucking away a strand of hair behind my ear.

I blushed. “I’m sorry; it must’ve been awkward seeing me breaking down like this…”

He shrugged. “Not really… this is not the first time, remember? But then again you weren’t crying that time,” he softly chuckled.

“Yah!” I playfully smacked his arm. It was embarrassing, remembering the incident back at the laundry room.

“Eunhee-ah, do you want to talk about it? You’ll feel much better after letting it all out,” asked Sungyeol, tilting his head at me.

I gave him a skeptical look.

“Hey, hey, I can be a good listener too you know,” he lightly nudged me.

I gave in, I guess telling someone about it wouldn’t hurt. So in the end I told him about the warnings that Jihyun threw at me, the reason why she was doing it, how it was connected to the showdown, and why I must win against Jihyun. I also told him why I can’t tell Myungsoo.

“…I don’t want Myungsoo to be worrying about it. It’s my own problem and I don’t want to drag him into it…” I explained, gazing miserably at the floor.

“I see, well don’t you worry Eunhee… I’m sure he’ll understand sooner or later,” Sungyeol tried to cheer me up.

“I hope that he won’t stay mad at me for long…” I muttered, still looking at the floor.

Then suddenly Sungyeol grabbed hold of my hand and dragged me out of the studio.

“Y-Yah! Sungyeol, what are you doing?” I exclaimed, trying to free myself from his grip.

“I don’t like seeing you feeling down like this so I’m taking you somewhere to cheer you up,” said Sungyeol, still not letting go.

“B-But it’s getting late… And w-where are we going anyway?” I puffed, in an attempt to catch up to his long strides.

He grinned. “You’ll see.”

 

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We stood there by the gate, observing our surroundings like we were lost or something. Out of all places, he took me here to the playground just across the street from our dormitory to cheer me up. 

I looked at him weirdly. He was giving me that foolish grin of his while rubbing his nape.

“Umm, this is the only place I could think of… Come on, it’ll be fun! I used to come here whenever I was feeling down,” he said as he put an arm around my shoulder.

“Typical…” I mumbled, shrugging off his arm.

“The last one to the swings is a rotten egg!” he shouted as he jumped over the gate and ran towards the swings.

“Yah! That’s not fair! Come back here Sungyeol!” I yelled, running after him.

In the end I lost, he was sitting on one of the swings and insisted that I had to push him. I really didn’t get this guy, wasn’t he suppose to cheer me up?

I pouted and unwillingly pushed the swing. “Aish, you’re so childish…” I softly mumbled to myself.

“Did you say something?” he asked.

“Nothing,” I simply answered while I lazily continued to push him.

Suddenly he put his feet down and stopped the swing.

“Yah, is that how you push? There’s no strength, where’s the fun in that?” Sungyeol complained.

He then stood up, took my hand and sat me down on the swing.

“Sungyeol-ah, what are you doing?” I turned to look at him.

“Just hold on tight,” he whispered.

Unexpectedly, he pushed the swing really hard which caused me to scream, “Yah! Not too hard! Not too hard!” I closed my eyes and tightened up my grip.

Sungyeol laughed. “Relax Eunhee-ah, and just enjoy the ride.”

Despite the fear, I tried to relax and slowly opened my eyes. I grinned, seeing the pretty stars as I swung high. I closed my eyes again and felt the cool breeze brush my face, it was refreshing. It felt as if all my troubles and worries were all blown away by the wind.

After that, we ended up running around the playground playing tag and I laughed at Sungyeol’s impersonations and funny faces. What he did may be simple, but it did cheer me up and I really appreciate his effort.  

We played at the playground until it was time for us to go back. Although it was fun, we didn’t want to break curfew and get punished for it.

 

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Sungyeol tried to be a gentleman and walked me back to my room. I suppressed my laughter; it was pretty amusing seeing this side of him.

When we arrived at my door, I turned to him and smiled. “Well, thank you for cheering me up Sungyeol. I had fun and I feel much better now,” I sincerely thanked him.

“It was nothing… I’m glad that I can see you smile and laugh again,” said Sungyeol, awkwardly rubbing his nape.

“Well then, good night Eunhee and see you tomorrow.” He gave a little wave before turning around heading for the boys’ dormitory.

“Sungyeol-ah, wait!” I called him.

He looked back at me. “What is Eunhee-ah?”

“Umm, I was just wondering… why are you suddenly being nice to me?”

Sungyeol’s face then became serious. He took a few long strides towards me and leaned down until we were eye to eye.

 

 

 

 

“Isn’t it obvious…? I like you Eunhee.”

 

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Sungyeol confessed? 0_0

@namstaroo: I think someone did more than just cheer her up LOL. Hope you like this update ^.^

To you, thank you so much for reading =D

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Choi_Kk
#1
Would please update this story? TT
I reall y love this OMG
I love how sweet Myungsoo and Sungyeol are.
This is a nice story I've ever read >_<
RisikaBlack #2
I really like it. I can't wait to read the following chapters ^^
Rini6189
#3
There are certain factors that can explain why 4Minute don't seem to be in high spirits to pull off a strong, captivating performance. Myungsoo is sharp to be able to notice this. Since they seem to be just doing it for show, there's no passion in their performance. It's like they've lost their touch when they don't know what dancing truly is anymore to them--like its value becomes lost to them over time. This happens to one's interest that doesn't become a passion. Passion is what keeps one grounded and focused on his/her lifelong dream/goal. Another possible factor could be anxiety about going up against The Syndicate in the showdown if they're worried about whether the band's performance would overpower theirs.

Great job with the details. Though, 4Minute's part seems to be lacking. I understand that it's hard for you to describe their dance routine since this isn't your area of interest. Anybody can get an idea of how their performance looks like from watching video clips of 2NE1 performing "I Am The Best."
Rini6189
#4
xD Sungjong and his divaness... Myungsoo is glad to have his friend back. It had been awkward and tense between the two of them when Sungyeol kept avoiding him after seeing the two sleeping next to each other. That didn't make it easy for him to be worried about his best friend. From watching her perform, Myungsoo understands Eunhee's love of music by the passion that she puts into her performance. It's like a reflection of himself in the way that he feels about dancing. Being a dance expert himself, it's easy for him to pick out any flaws in 4Minute's choreography. He could make a great dance teacher. With his help, Eunhee can improve on her dancing in time for the dance off between Jihyun and her. When there's a chance, he could make it up to her and apologize for his behavior towards her that one evening. "Sleepless Dream" is a nice song. For the audience to be moved by it, it must be a song that reaches out to them in spirit in which they can relate to it. The reaction from Eunhee, E-Young, and Injoon at the end can either be good or bad. Judging from the response they received from the audience as they were performing, it's likely that they've come out as the winner of this showdown. There's no doubt that Myungsoo and Sungyeol are among those who've voted for The Syndicate to show their support.

4Minute did come off as flashy in their performance since they're aiming to impress the audience with their dance moves. Being flashy isn't enough for a performance to move the audience. What's lacking in their performance is connection with the people watching them. This is what The Syndicate's performance has. It's what makes them the winner in this case.
KiD_HaeJoon #5
Next~they surely win...
Rini6189
#6
Hearing his confession seemed to have pulled somewhat on her heart strings. After an awkward pause, it looked like she shrugged it off and remarked jokingly to ease the tension in the air. Since she didn't know how else to respond, she figured that making light of the situation is the best way to go.

It's good that Sungyeol is speaking to Myungsoo again. Even though he was being harsh towards her, Myungsoo does care about her and mean well. Since he loves her, he's already forgiven her in his heart. The concern that's evident in his tone of voice proves it. Sungyeol's got a point, though. Myungsoo did come off as insensitive by not being understanding of her and her position. It seems that Sungyeol has matured despite his childish demeanor in order for him to say this to him. He is slowly turning into a man. Love can change a person.

So, Eunhee is not so oblivious after all. She is aware of her own feelings as well as others' around her. For her to not have the heart to reject him, she must be worried about hurting Sungyeol's feelings and causing a rift between them. He did a nice thing for her by being there for her when she needs to be comforted and some cheering up, so it won't feel right to her to kill the mood by turning him down. She is considerate to be concerned about his feelings. However, she's giving him false hope by not letting him know that she doesn't feel the same way. It's not awkward to tell him that she likes him as a friend or a brother. That's better than pushing him away or not showing any sign that she cares for him in some way. At least Sungyeol has the chance to prove himself to Eunhee in expressing his love for her. "Nothing ventured, nothing gained." Then he'd know when to give up with no regrets once he discovered that she doesn't return his feelings. It would be easier for him to let her go then so that she could be happy with the one she truly loves.

Do your best to describe the showdown in detail.
Rini6189
#7
I've decided to point out some mistakes I've spotted to help you improve on your English writing skills. It would be too much if I point out every single one. This is just to give you an idea of what to work on.

Some Ch. 17 mistakes:

I like you Eunhee
* Comma after "you"

why thank you there Sungyeol.
* Comma after "there"

I like you too my friend
* Comma after "too"

* Note: In some sentences, a pair of commas is needed to separate the title (like "my friend") or the name of the person from the entire phrase to make the whole thing flow smoothly when it serves as an interruption.
Example: This, my friend, is a Kitara.

I stopped on my tracks and placed my hand over my chest.
* The preposition should be "in" instead of "on."

You made her cry for God sake!
Correction: God's sake

She hasn’t made up her mind yet so I still have a chance
* Comma after "yet"

But if you ever make her cry again, I will certainly not let you go Myungsoo
* Comma after "go"

I turned my back on him as I pulled up the covers, leaving him there flabbergasted.
Correction: leaving him flabbergasted there

The showdown and showcase is nearing, plus I still need to improve my dancing skills.
Correction: The showdown and the showcase are nearing; plus, I still need to improve my dancing skills.

I gradually closed my eyes and with a tired heart, I finally fell asleep.
Correction #1: I gradually closed my eyes, and with a tired heart, I finally fell asleep.
Correction #2: I gradually closed my eyes. With a tired heart, I finally fell asleep.
lotsohugs4me
#8
keke I even thought Eunhee didn't know and aww so now sungyeol and myungsoo friendship is like this thats sad
what will happen next?
so curious keke
KiD_HaeJoon #9
Good,trying not to reject him..just say u like as friend^_^ no more awkward...will the next chapter have romantic part with myungsoo♥
Rini6189
#10
The Kitara looks like one hi-tech, cool instrument. I saw a little of how it works by checking out LED Apple, which you'd mentioned to me in one of your previous messages.

We can see how Eunhee came to love and appreciate music. It's because she was influenced by her father at a very young age. He taught her everything he knows about music. Through music, the two share a special bond. That's why she feels so strongly about music. It reminds her of her deceased father. In memory of him, she pours her heart and soul into the music she creates and plays.