The better plot

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I read a story and thought the plot wasn’t that great. So I decided to make the changes I thought would make for better entertainment, despite having been told that I “cAn’T cRiTiCiZe OtHeR pEoPlE’s WoRk If I wRiTe ToO”, sweetie, once I threw away 12 chapters because the readers told me where I was heading would make for a ty plot and I changed directions at the feedback.

 

OR

 

The one where Jeongyeon gets stabbed in the back but manages to get through it.

Foreword

Yeah, well, I feel I wrote it better.

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brithistorian #1
Chapter 1: I loved this! At the end I wanted there to be more, but at the same time I didn't really feel like there was anymore. I felt like you gave us an ending that told us where all the characters were going without it feeling like you had wrapped everything up too neatly. As an author who struggles with ending, my hat's off to you for that! ^_^
Mustafina 1153 streak #2
Chapter 1: But happy?
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