Oh She is

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“Did you really promise a witch your first born for a Versace coat?”

 

“How would I know she was serious?” Gwiboon wails.

 

Or, an AU in which Gwiboon is a broke fashion student, and Taeyeon is the witch who just wants Gwiboon to get a damn partner so she can keep her end of the deal.

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gwiboonivy
#1
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: OH MY FREAKING GOD I LOVED THIS I'M S C R E E C H I N G
ok first of all: doing god's work writing some girlee fics on here. im so mad i didnt see this sooner? + doing god's work and writing not only taekey which is a blessing, but FEM TAEKEY+ the cover is soooo pretty??? FRANCESCA IM ROLLING ON THE FLOOR

I HAVE SO MUCH TO SAY OKAY i wanted to structure this comment properly but im a mess so that won't happen.

The plot is SO fun and unique SO REALISTIC IN ITS FANTASY and you just carried it out...chef kiss. perfectly. love everything about this.


i love the way you depicted the characters,,,,, so faithful to their real personality (I see kibum doing all of this over a Versace coat)
I LOVE EUNSOOK like,,, when gwi was dramatically telling her tale of woe and she was just like...unimpressed hurry the up (SO JINKI) + calling her out on the gay storytelling [[[ by the way, THIS. the way she trailed off constantly to specify how pretty taeyeon looked im c r y i n g as a lesbian myself, i relate (seriously she looks so gorgeous in that interior you described, with that hair...and the different outfits.........///// asdfghjk and when she stares into the crystal ball...hot) also the part when tae said woohyun is lesbian bait THAT'S ALSO ME A LESBIAN WHO DELUDED HERSELF INTO BIUALITY FOR YEARS this story could serve as the testament of gay people for future generations.]]]

For real these two are ing lesbians. the way they could be celebrating their 50th marriage anniversary and they'd still be like ///////////omg sookie do you think she's inot me?///////

I LOVE YOUR TAEYEONIE SO MUCH!!! i swear ashe gave me the glitters and bubbles inside she's sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo taemin!!!! crying sobbing screaming throwing up.
oh to be a hot queer weirdo witch spoiling a hot queer damsel in distress and listen to her rants........

the dates: i totally see that happening help,,,jjongie being too much for gwiboon who's too much herself and NO WHEN MINHO ASKED fOR THE KISS MY HEART DROPPED I ACTUALLY said ⁿᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ bₐbyyyy

Besides that, it was actually very relatable and I think you expressed the feeling behind it very well. Like, so well that it brought me back to the last time I kissed a man and I went through the exact same thought process. Its good and you overall have a good considerstion of the guy but it's just...you feel it on the lips and nowhere else. ALSO TRUE GIRLS ARE SO MUCH BETTER KISSERS ITS JUST SOMETHING INHERENT IT TRASCENDS PREFERENCE

and,,,and,,, and,,,the ending was---- 👉👈 my favourite thing in the world,,,,, 👉👈 the the the the lil grin on tae and the the the,,,the future thingie and,,,,,,and and and she wanted to hear it from her and and and the lil kissie that didnt happen and and (っ◔◡◔)っ ♥ asdghjkdfghjopkouy ♥



this is absolutely one of my favourite stories :333 love the writing, love the plot, the dialogues, the characters- evrything is soo well done. hats off to you!!! you should be proud of this one <33333
vampireme12
#2
Chapter 1: aww, that was cute and fun indeed :)
Thank you for sharing this.
Looking forward to more ^^
shojinryori #3
Chapter 1: That was fun! I really enjoyed it. 🥰