Chapter 1: this.... is so... heartwarmingππ i love the plot, the details and their characters so much!
i have a suggestion authornim, in those flashback scenes you could maybe use italic or put "flashback" to differentiate the present and the past bcs i was confused for some parts (but i managed to read it well, fortunately), but its still up to you tho:)!
anyway, i love your stories and thank you so much for writing this too! hope you have a good day today^^
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