Chapter 1: Wow! I love Hwasun with all my heart but I this time was really feeling Whee In's feelings and was waiting for Wheesa ??? T-T my Wheesa Heart ? you are amazing thank you for sharing with us
Chapter 1: That plot twist was not I was thinking. I thought it would be a good ending but this is even better. This is my first time I read this kind and plot twist and honestly, it and hurt and I want it more. Yeah it hurt as a Wheesa shipper and wish that every story, they will end up with each other. But I'm glad that you write this story and you write it beautifully that I didn't not even see the plot twist coming. I glad you took this plot twist because it can happen to everyone. Sometime we looked down on ourselves and not consider we worth it enough for other and that we are the bundle. Seeing Wheein being this hurt is the consequence of self doubt. That why sometime we need to let other in and bring you out. I'm not saying that being close up is bad because there are things you have to keep it to yourself. But allow other to come in, especially if you have a signification other, can take that doubt off.
Some relationship may not work but it ok to open up to them. But also be careful because we may not know that person never but it a step to open up a little and make that relationship work. Sometime we don't received the same love you giving to them but sometime, you need to let it go even if it hurt like hell and that part of life to find who you are and your path
Again this is a beautifully written story and I hope you wrote more of this type of this story. Keep up with the good work and I'm waiting to read your next story
Chapter 1: i don't think your writing is bad, you were able to communicate wheein's feelings and isn't that probably the most important thing in writing? that the reader gets a taste of the character's state of mind? we are all amateurs here and that should be the reason you shouldn't beat yourself up for your writing, you do it for fun or to help yourself in different ways. don't worry about anything, just keep doing it if that's what you want to do.
this was a nice, but sad piece. i enjoyed it, really. thank you for sharing it.
ps: i sent you a pm responding to your message wall a few days ago, did you check it out?
Chapter 1: Hey, the plot twist at the end is heart wrenching.
For every relationship that ends always have an impact on us. It will hurt it. In fact, it should hurt because of what you have invested in that relationship. But that also meant, you gave your what you could. Don't beat yourself up over spilled milk. Cry and move on. When opportunity comes to open your heart again for another relationship, you should give your all again.
Overcome that fear.. Talk about it if you have to. But never let it beat you up. Not everyday, someone will fall in love with you for who you are.
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