Clock is Ticking

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Time. It was always a matter of time. 

Foreword

This was born as a kind of a backstory for the blog I just posted, but it got out of control and it became a stand-alone piece. A small, truly small one-shot, I hope you guys like it, I'd love to know what you think.

A special shout-out to taetaela, if it wasn't for her, this piece might have never existed in the first place. 

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ChomiChobbom #1
It's been a long time
ChomiChobbom #2
Author niiiim
-speed- #3
Chapter 1: wow. i felt that. :')
pandanonymous #4
Chapter 1: aww man the moment i read that first two paragraphs, i started preparing my heart for an angst, and an angst from you.. boi i wonder how this one shot would break me. hold on. wait maybe i'm wrong. is my ac on? why is it steaming hot in here?! :o
oh dear lord of the gays, that was beyond what i was expecting. literally.. made my ears red, cheeks flushed, wth. I FORGOT HOW GOOD ARE YOU WITH THIS. those little dialogues are more than enough to send a message, a feeling, it's very effective and I'm so so amazed at how well this story is written! <3 i'm forever a fan!
this made me want to read untouchable face again. oh no. am i ready to take another ride as good as that?! damn maybe i will!
thank you so much for writing this! i'm always looking forward to your works! it's like a blessing to me. hahahaha! i meant it. <3
ChobomPanda #5
Chapter 1: Overwhelming. I guess this is what I felt reading this piece and your blog piece too. Both are short and yet every words hit. Enough to make us feel Bittersweet :) those hints of sneak kisses and moments, forbidden romance, Time is always a great concept, an ability to turn a story upside down like it's either love is powerful than anything else or the actual fact that love doesn't always win. Holding on to some uncertainty is truly a brave move. Thank you for this. Got a lot of things on my mind but can't express it today. Maybe I'll write another comment in the future. :) all the best.
ckaz99 #6
Chapter 1: Nooo I'm not crying!! why am I crying again huhuu. Well gee goddamn that was amazing. I can't believe this was a small piece. You took me on such a ride!! Every word had a place that it felt like I read much longer than I did. That's really quality. Wow..

Of course I'm blown away! I was nervous coming into this, as I would with the title description haha. Ahh. Just. I'm in shock I can't function and I'm in love with this. This is amazing?? This is amazing!! Your style is a dream~ I want to pack up my stuff and camp in it.

The impact of three moments, and man oh man oh man oh man- those descriptions, how it feels, that bitterness, the time! And that last scene made me so happy too, hee~ It's gorgeous and fragile and I don't know what to do now. Thank you for writing this one, WavingPanda <3 It's beautiful
phouse #7
Chapter 1: are we talking about equation of love, relationship, or chobom here?

anyway is it just me or your writing style kinda different at each pieces? borrowing bomi's words here, its new yet familiar, aha.
taetaela #8
That special shout out for me tho, thank you WavingPanda-nim. That means a lot for me.

I don't know why but the way you write your oneshot it's so different for me. I mean..it's straight to the point. So it took me by surprise everytime i read your oneshot.
I'm a biggest fan of "Untouchable Face" so...hahaa

Keep writing WavingPanda-nim~ Fighting!
Panda0619 #9
Chapter 1: oooh so much tension in a one-shot.. you have a way of keeping your readers on edge!

It's such a waste to be a one-shot! =)
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