The Last Time I Saw You Cry

Description

 

This is my first time to write a HanChul fanfic. So, I hope you like it.. ^^ NO SILENT READERS PLEASE. :) Sorry if I have wrong grammar..

Foreword

 

You know what, time is really fast right? How does it fell when someone will go abroad? And you didn't even expect that something would probably happen. But also, you should accept it.

In this story, the foreigner Hankyung was really really close to Heechul. They don’t want to get separated to each other. Let’s see what will happen.

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tintin
#1
I just fixed my chapter 1. :)
kiwibubblecat
#2
You have minor problems. Your grammar is good, but you have to work on the small things that still matter like punctuations, capatalizations and proper use of Korean words. Sometimes it's also hard to know who's speaking at the dialogue. The use of 'so' at the beginning of sentences seem so informal. :p
loser220
#3
I love it, update soon!!
i hope hannie can realize and cure heechul depression!!
loser220
#4
Still reading