A Beautiful Mess

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[ONESHOT] After an argument he and his girlfriend have on their anniversary, Jiyong sifts through memories of their tumultuous relationship to justify to himself why he is still even in the relationship.  But a trip down memory lane helps me see beauty even through their painful mess. 

Foreword

Inspired by Jason Mraz's song, A Beautiful Mess.

And what a beautiful mess this is,
it's like picking up trash in dresses.
And the tides, they turn and our hearts disfigure,
But that's no concern when we're wounded together.
Here we are...

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clapyourhands #1
Absolutely wonderful^^
yeolchans #2
Chapter 1: I really love your writing style as well as how you coney the characters emotions. Good job!!
Frhsyn #3
omg this is such a cliffhanger. your writing style are so rare to be found! i'm glad i found this. a bit late but whatever lol <3
ohyeahhhsecrets #4
Chapter 1: GAY ... #cries




damn you writers
xtlover15 #5
this one shot is just really awesome. one of th writing styles i love reading ^^.
Kay_tea114 #6
This is very wonderfully written. It's one of those very few fanfics where I actually can feel what the character (in this case Jiyong) is feeling as he thinks about what he had just done.

As for the OC girl I feel like that's what Jiyong wants in a girl now. He wants a girl who's strong willed and independent while still being that cute and adorable girl that most men would fall for. She is, in many ways, GD's ideal girl.

Thanks for the nice read!
Iheartlife #7
AW! That's so cute ^_^
rinasaur #8
This is so really well written! I love how different the girl is from other usual characters I've seen nowadays. And from Ji's point of view? That's a bonus! :D keep up the good work and great use of Lena and Bae. Lol
mcpride_aikohanaa #9
damn! you're good! the girl's character is so me, more or less. hahaha. good job. I cried reading this. tsk tsk. you are gooood!
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