Chapter 1: Honestly..... I love this. I feel like I'm the same in many ways with Renjun here so it hit home. The ending caught me a bit off-guard but I should've known that's where this was going all along hahaha. Gosh this was so well written though. Amazing.
Chapter 1: i came for winren but is that loonct i see? my orbitzen heart is shookt! anyways i love the details of renjun's first meetings with everyone, but after he got into relationship the scenes were cut short... its okay tho because the focus was his fails. the ending is--how should i say--unsettling? haha i just dont want him to fail again...
keep writing!
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