Chapter 3: Nice. I was skeptical of the writing during chapter 2 but reading this chapter brings out the light in your writing style. I like how distinctive it is the characterization during their own pov chapter, hope can see more of Yuqi's characterization in the future chapter if you gonna continue this.
p.s i wonder how you gonna do with your pacing in this story tho, it seems very domestic and daily life alike so I guess it would be taking a long time to complete this fic with this pacing.
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