Prologue

The Man In The Shadows
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1st December

Shin Sooyoung’s shoes were killing her.

She had bought them on Thursday even though they rubbed her little toes.

They cost her one third of her weekly wage and a good chunk of her deflated ego when she realised she had bought the wrong size.

She’d worn them on Thursday night and again on Friday while making spaghetti for dinner. And she had worn them to work on a Saturday even though she knew she’d be the only person on the eighth floor — quite possibly in the whole building. She’d wanted to break them in for Monday, when she was planning to walk past the glass-walled office of the new accounts manager at least twenty times, because he had a sports car and an incredible face, and the ridiculous high heels made her calves look fabulous.

But now it was those very same heels that she was running in.

Running for her life, she had to assume.

And, as the machine-gun clatter of her brand-new heels rang through the empty stairwell, any consciousness Shin Sooyoung could spare from the terror of being chased by a madman was consumed by the desperate wish she’d come to work in her usual weekend garb of jeans, cardigan and Reeboks.

Because right here, right now, her shoes might mean the difference between life and death...


The man had appeared from across the wide open-plan office. She had looked up from the box file and seen him standing at the lift. It had given her a little jolt of surprise and fear. Ridiculous, really — in broad daylight in the middle of Busan. But she was alone on the eight floor, and that made all the difference.

Still, he seemed to be an ordinary man. Not weird. A delivery guy, most likely — or lost.

“Hi,” she’d said as he began to walk forward at a leisurely pace. “May I help you?”

“No need,” he’d said with a smile. “I’m a friend.”

Confused, she cocked her head to the side and frowned, trying to place where she could have met him before. She couldn’t have, really, because as he had gotten closer and his face became clearer, she realised that this was a face one could never forget. “I’m sorry,” she chuckled in embarrassment. This was a man whose face was carved by God himself and she couldn’t even remember him! “I can’t seem to remember who you are. What’s your name?”

By way of an answer, the strikingly handsome man had put his gloved hand inside his coat and drawn out a knife.

Shin Sooyoung had never been in danger before, but she’d hesitated for only a second before leaping to her feet, grabbing her bag and running.

Because he’d been blocking her way to the lift, she’d headed for the stairs...


Sooyoung didn’t scream. The thought of the sound bouncing endlessly up and down the stairwell only frightened her more — and she was starting not to panic, trying to think. She ran as fast as she dared in those stupid shoes, clutching the black-panelled handrail in case she lost her footing, watching the stairs blur underfoot with eyes that bulged in concentration, desperate not to fall, her long dark hair swinging into , her bag bumping her ribs.

There would be someone on the fourth floor. She had once come halfway up in the lift with a woman who’d complained about working on weekends.

Sooyoung stopped above the fourth-floor landing, panting, gasping. She forced herself to be quiet so she could listen.

She heard nothing. No one.

Maybe he wasn’t coming after her. Maybe he’d never planned to. Maybe he hadn’t even had a knife.

He had though...

She started downstairs again — slowly this time — her knees like jelly and her toes on fire. She pulled open the fire-escape door marked with a giant 4 and took a tentative step on the carpet.

“Hello!”

The lift door slid open. The man was inside. Calm and still, and with a knife — it was a knife! — held casually by his side.

He smiled.

Sooyoung gave a shriek of shock, fear and disbelief. She swung her bag at his head, hitting him a glancing blow, showering him with assorted bag-junk, seeing him flinch a

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ChickenNuggetChen
#1
Chapter 7: You’re so GOOD. What the hell? How are you so good? You’ve managed to give us a peek inside the mind of a psychopath, and as expected it wasn’t pretty. No mental illness is. Good Lord how I’ve missed your writing
MsPancakes
#2
Chapter 7: This was written so deep and dramatic, it's like reading from a novel or something, like, I really felt it bruh (´∀`)... And why do i find a psychopathic jin really hot(・∀・)
XiuminsKnuts
#3
Chapter 7: 69 comments do I really wanna ruin that?

LOL okay so this is not Jin x OC? Because I was (am?) really wondering how we were gonna get from A (killer vs possible victim) to B (loooooooveeeee) and I was like how in the world
isaisy
#4
Chapter 1: and this is only the prologue. tense much T^T
FastAndTheJunmyeon
#5
Chapter 7: I think I picked up on the title and Seokjin. “Ordinary” while Seokjin is just anything but that lmao, a juxtaposition like him!

Love love love this chapter, because this is the gritty direction I see this story going towards. Seokjin is no romantic figure because he’s mentally unstable, and right now he’s spiralling down the rabbit hole thinking Areum is somehow calling him into his life.

Okay if you hadn’t explained the heart but I would have been lost, because I was stumped at the “alien” bit, but that’s just because I’m dumb lol. I love this and I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us next!
tiffany_gunawan #6
Chapter 7: This is so good, probably the best thriller fanfic i've ever read! Seokjin' character reminds me of lee sung hoon of duel
flowergirl91
#7
Chapter 7: I like her relationship with Taehyung it’s a funny one, I like knowing what’s on Jin’s Mind and how is he thinking And lastly I like that Jungkook is involved in this story cause he is my bias <3
ChickenNuggetChen
#8
Chapter 7: Seokjin is all types of bad news and bish yes, I’m here for when we go more in depth to his issues
KaChingXiumin
#9
Chapter 7: I love everything about this chapter. I love the way you described the cigarette (idk lmao it was just so easy to picture this), the furniture being a dead giveaway that he hails from an incredibly wealthy family, the way you make it seem how Seokjin almost hallucinated the transplanted heart coming out of his body and omg yes this such a rare fix and I’m living for it.

Seokjin is honestly such a juxtaposition! If you think about it, he’s doing all the things that speed up the race towards death, but at the same time he really doesn’t want to die. He’s living on borrowed time, and he knows this, and I’m wondering if it’s this knowledge that has an influence into why he’s killing all these people. He doesn’t care if he gets caught because he’s going to die anyway!

Okay I’m going out on a limb here with my extra af comments lmao, but honestly, I’m so happy you’re back. This fic is unconventional and a 180 degree turn from your previous works as Serendipity, and I’m living for this.
RockabillyHippie
#10
Chapter 7: Jin is so interesting, holy . So his dad was an . At least that's what I picked up on. His mom, not so much and they all obviously came from money. And the babysitter bit...either Seokjin was a babysitter and did something or he had a babysitter that did something. Oof. Ohmygosh, this chapter has my mind going too fast for my liking. I literally just woke up like a few minutes ago and my mind is still groggy as hell xD Was a babysitter the reason his parents died and Seokjin had to get a heart transplant? Or was his heart transplant because of a birth defect or illness? Anyways, you already know that I ing loved this chapter like YAAAAS!!!!