Chapter 1: Wow, this is wonderful! Beautifully written! I like the plot of Yongsun being a fugitive and Byul being a police officer. Must have been really tough on them to have so much distance between them. I like how Byul couldn't stay mad at Yongsun. Ah, love~ Love the use of cryptic language between them. For some reason it adds on to this feeling of romanticism. Ugh at these two being greasy to and for each other ;-; I really really like the line you used in the Foreword. It's a simple line, yet it's so meaningful when it comes to Moonsun; of course first, it being their 'names', and next, about how Byul just dropped everything to be reunited with her sun, and this makes my heart melt ;-; It'll be so interesting if the four of them reunite some day! What a lovely poem by Yongsun. Enjoyed the flow of the story. Thank you very much for this! :)

Chapter 1: Aww.. is that all? Btw, nice story, author-nim! ^^