From Hell with Love

Description

What happens when the seven lords of hell concerne themselves with humas ,a little more than they should?

 

Foreword

Then war broke out in heaven. Michael and his angels fought against the dragon, and the dragon and his angels fought back. 
But he was not strong enough, and they lost their place in heaven. 
The great dragon was hurled down—that ancient serpent called the devil, or Satan, who leads the whole world astray. He was hurled to the earth, and his angels with him.
As the world grew up to old today, the dragon plotted away
His angel now to fear demonic beings, rely on sins to live ,they help the dragon on his treasons revival quest. And evil they wear as a vest. 
On the sixth day of the third, in the ninetieth year of two thousands, 
A glow, down on the red realm bellow, broke out and now, 
The great prince of hell will revive the war.

 

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Jumpdiva
#1
Chapter 1: The plot is very intriguing, but the story is not very well written. I would suggest finding a beta reader who can correct your grammar and writing. Having bad grammar will take away from your story and make it hard for others to read, which will damage your really good plot idea.