oh my gwadddd omgeeeeeeee. ok first of all, this story is well written, like i do believe there were some minor mistake in grammar but the way you kinda use various vocab is really good. its not much but enough. i like how this is short and straight to the point, its a type of story where i could just read while waiting for the next train kind of feeling . well, my first impression while reading like the 4th 5th paragraph, thought it gonna be rated-M, but yeah, THANK YOU for keeping Jaehyun's innocence, that boy is still smoll huhu. btw, good one!
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