freeze frame

Description

Zitao stops time so this moment can last a bit longer.

Foreword

2nd prompt for the weekly writing challenge except this took me 2 weeks because i . went to bed at 12 last night and woke up at 1 to finish writing so now i'm posting without proofreading

 

prompt: 

"one day, time just suddenly stops for a short moment for you. at first, you tried to mess around, but after the 246th times it happened, you start to realise that your power is not stopping time, but being able to move in time frozen by another person in the world"

rules: no death

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yeollchan #1
Chapter 1: I love youuuu and Sehun and Zitao ;-;

This is so short but hit me like a brick wall... my taohun feels! The word choice you used to describe the situations made me feel like I could place myself in their shoes! Amazing visual details and descriptions. I literally felt my rib cage hurting when Sehun laughed- am I going crazy or what? Also can I just voice my appreciation of your creativity *^* Thought it was gonna be Sehun with the OP powers, proved wrong. Thought Zitao was just gonna remove his memories, proved wrong x2. Thought they were in a natural earthquake, proved wrong x3. I see the whole mama powers you got interlaced in your story, I see Yifan, I see I see. This was so short but so good and sooo much potential to be a great long fic, but a part of me is glad it ended here. Thank you soo much <3

I'm out. *sobs*
_jongdaenosaur #2
Chapter 1: i actually laughed at the baekhyun being burnt part before the horror struck me bc hhhnghh yeol and dae i can't why u gotta play with my trio bros feelings. also the luhan part i just??? but nothing compared to u actually made yifan defecting the team and subjected them to this i just lost my (laf u yifan).

this could've been better if it were longer and more thought out. it rly has all the potential i'm so mad bc i know you wont ever do it in a million years. you touched my soul bc mamapowers is my weakness ahgsajGSJsdsds
also the comfortable minumum of prose throughout the fic is rly v so... you lol.

and i expected this to be sad I ALREADY KNEW SOMEONE WOULD DIE "OFF SCREEN" BC YOU SUCH PIECE OF . but the fact that u picked this prompt for us bc u want to write taohun and, in the process, subjected me to hell since i also have to write this prompt, u should be aSHAMED OF URSELF
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