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Here are all of the reviews I have recieved so far. I will try to get to reviews as soon as possible. I tend to be on here often so it shouldn't take too long. 
Plotlines: 
One: 01
Two: 02
Three: 03
Four: 02
Five: 01

jujubeee

Here she is!! My character Hyosun!
She is a second mother character to the group, she isn't much of a leader but she knows how to help leaders get work done. Hyosun is the obsessive organizer of the group and knows how to keep things perfect! 

chosen

Congrats! You're the first to apply! First thing I noticed from this is the faceclaim, I've never seen her before, so this is a plus for me from the start. One thing that I do need you to fix is the ethnicity, you skipped over that part (I assume she's just Korean?) so make sure to fill that out as soon as possible, and comment when you have fixed it. 
Her personality section is pretty cute! Her and Hyosun can both be prim and proper together! The background is also pretty good, although it wasn't long (it doesn't have to be, don't worry.) you gave me a lot of information to work with and a good storyline to your character! I like the little mysterious scandal that you provided me too! Her love story is adorable, too. 
Thank you so much for applying, I like Minhee! So just fix that one little thing and I will be happy to accept her! I'll place her in 'pending' instead of 'error' because it's such a small thing.

accepted

Hey! Thank you for applying! I love this faceclaim, she's adorable! Also, her personality is really cute and I can definetly see what her personality is like through your writing. Oh my god I LOVE her background. You put so much detail and time into it and it's adorable. I love how her family all is one way but she is different. It's also cute how she got inspiration from Jackson. Ahh the trivia is cute too and the fact that she really wants to meet Jackson and tell him her story!! 
Her trainee section is cute!! She went from 0 experience to a lot and you brought up Hyosun in your application wow so cute!! The love section is good, too. At first I wondered why you added a rap twin but then realized that you put plotline 4 as your backup, so that's fine haha. The future scandal and scene requests are great. Thank you again so much for applying! I loved her! She's accepted

accepted

Hello! Thanks for applying! I love Hwasa so much ahh! She's gorgeous! I love these new personality traits, she seems kinda fiesty to me! I like that! The begining of her background is fine, but the second half is where I am confused. Is Hyeongsin University a fictional one? (You should probably user a real one). Because I couldn't find anything about Taeyong attending a University and also couldn't find that University name anywhere.
Also, Could you add some type of background about her wanting to become an idol or being musically talented? Since you applied for plotline 3, she also will have producing talents, so it would be great if you could somehow add her fiddling around with producing things. There wasn't much mention of her auditioning to YG, so that should be added too.
For the trivias and likes, they're fine but Mixnine just started, I don't think she should be a participant to that...
On to the trainee section, 1Million isn't an idol company, so they