Chapter 1: This was a very different story, I enjoyed reading it though it did leave me with a few questions. Why didn't Yunseong take the throne? Were all the people of his country dead by then? You started off by saying that no one died that decade but then alluded to there being no one left, then that Euijin had bettered th Kingdom so honestly I'm confused over the fate of the country.
Other than that, I loved how you painted both Euijin and Seyong. The thought that someone can do good things yet still be a bad person is not something that many authors play with and so I highly enjoyed it. This is different from probably any story I've read on here and I really appreciate that originality. It seemed to have hunts of King Arthur in it so I was excited to read and but Yunseong on the throne, but alas. I did feel as if the story itself would benefit from being given more time and length to flesh everything out and to wrap things up well, but all in all I very much enjoyed your entry!

Chapter 1: I really enjoyed this. It was a nice show of how friendships can crumble and also how people can change so much. Seyong was such a good person and I loved his character, with being so strong, with a good heart. And the friendship he had with the others was beautiful, too.

Oh wow this looks good!