i tried to follow your voice (i couldn't find it)

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The five times Mina lies and the one time she doesn't.

Foreword

first fic of 2018 and also for twice.... yay.... i guess

this might just be the shortest thing i've ever written AND published and honestly NOT PROUD of it but i just wanted to show that i'm still alive and breathing lol

writing and idk what i wanted to achieve with this but it happened

currently editing so it should be up in a few days :D 

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Spankers
#1
I'm reading through all your fics and it so happened to be on your birthday too so Happy Birthday!

This fic is so beautifully written, it's such a good representation of an angsty fic. I did shed a few tears at the very end. There's a few parts I'm wondering about, like whether the wedding happened, if Nayeon's memories came back, how did Momo play a part in this whole thing. This whole story hurts, but I couldn't stop myself from rereading it again.

Thanks for this author-nim.
dkdldb #2
Chapter 1: Beautiful angsty fic
ChillerThriller
#3
Chapter 1: I've read this so many times now. You're writing is so beautiful and it really makes me feel the emotion in your fics.
bluelyps27
#4
Chapter 1: The quality of writing you display is second to none. You have more eloquence in your pinky than I do in my entire body. I hesitate to think about what you can do when you're older. I hope you continue to write so I can get a glimpse into what great writing should be.
ImMina-nim
#5
Chapter 1: Wow too emotions for a night. It was amazing, I really like all the fic. I felt so sad for Momo and Nayeon, it wasn't their faults. And Mina, wow. Good job, author-nim
xyz_cuzuknow #6
Chapter 1: The emotions this story has given me is too much to handle. I even felt bad for Momo even though her character was just like a glimpse of light at a dark night; especially when Mina said that she got used in being hurt that breaking someone's heart isn't that bad.
Mina's part was so frustrating and hurting yet beautiful as she kept on holding on to the person who doesn't recognize her anymore(she's so loyal that it's the cause of her pain). She was selfish for hurting Momo(lol I really sympathize Momo here) but anyway, I think people would lean in to what she did if ever we're on the same position. It's normal to look for someone who could mend us, at least give us the affection we need when the person we want couldn't. (The start of doubt in a relationship, I think I'll be one of those friends who would tell her to just go and set herself free haha)

But it's not even Nayeon's fault that's why I can't bring myself to hate her character even though she's really that . She didn't wish for everything to happen anyway and she's got her own suffering as well; it's just that this story focuses on Mina's side.

The old Nayeon might not comeback and those I don't love yous are not the same anymore but they could start anew, slowly then all at once with I love you.
Thank you for writing this fic!
ImMina-nim
#7
I look forward to update XD fighting~~