the legends and the myths (something just like this)

Description

when doyeon learns that her neighbor is a superhero, she finds herself getting involved in the messed up world of crime scene. being hunted down by the villains doesn't sound good at all but luckily they make a great duo and the idea of forming a superhero squad sounds fun enough.

Foreword

superhero!au. 

i'm going to borrow some existing superhero characters' aliases and background (not really a fancast?? Dx) so if you are a fan of dc comics and batman then hello there, this might be familiar with you. and if not, there's no need to confuse yourself, just think of them as superheroes, however you want to imagine. i'll explain everything to you along the way though you might already know joker, harley quinn, batman and wonder woman, haha!

have fun reading < 3

 

 

 

 

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wertias_sk5 #1
Chapter 1: I love superheroes stories and movies, so this fanfic is right up my alley. Though I'm more of a Marvel fan than DC comics, but I still have a fair amount of knowledge about superheroes from DC comics lol I also sensed some 'The Incredibles' animation movie vibes when you mentioned that the city is full of villains and superheroes. The idea of making Daniel as a superhero is very fresh, enough to get me excited to read more in the upcoming chapters!

Aside from the minor grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there, the overall flow of the first chapter is good. Though I want to point out that since Suzy is a woman, you might want to call her 'landlady' instead of landlord. And having over 6000 words for the first chapter is not fairly short (it was a very satisfying length XD), you did a great job because I even struggled to write up a 3000 words update for my story. The personality of each characters that you mentioned so far were also well defined, except for the next-door-hero Red Hood since he only made a short appearance at the end.

I enjoyed the first chapter. Can't wait to see what's in store in the next chapter from that cliffhanger at the end. I'm very curious as to why he just indirectly informed her of his identity as her neighbour...
p/s: May I know what it means by S-rated criminals or heroes?
blueandgrey_ #2
i don't think i've ever been more excited for a fic than i am for this one!!! the description is so promising and the plot sounds so interesting and i am eagerly waiting for updates!!! (no pressure though) ♡
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