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Love,Someone

"Hey guys!" Mark said walking into BamBam's room,seeing BamBam struggle to zip up his sweater "Hi Mark" Yugyeom said,"So how was it BamBam?" Mark asked BamBam "My hurts" BamBam said.Yugyeom was probably dying "You okay over there?" Mark asked Yugyeom "It *Laughs* was just too *Laughs* Funny!" Yugyeom said,copying BamBam "Yah!It really hurts!" BamBam said "I told you to be careful now my brother is hurt" Mark said picking up BamBam and kissing (Squishig might I add) his face.BamBam struggled to get out "Shomebody hewp me" BamBam said (Or tried to say).BamBam jumped out of Mark's arms and went into Yugyeom's arms "On a scale of 1 to 100 how much do you love me?" BamBam asked "Broken scale" Yugyeom said "So that would be what number?" BamBam asked "Bigger than the biggest number" Yugyeom said.BamBam couldn't even get out of Yugyeoms arms "I need to poop" BamBam said "Than poop" Yugyeom said "What?" BamBam asked "You heard me" "I'M RIGHT HERE GUYS STOP!" Mark said

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HEY GUYS I NEED COMMENTS ON WHAT TO WRITE SO ANY IDEAS????I'M SO SORRY THAT I MAKE SHORT CHAPTERS....I'M A BAD WRITER I KNOW SO PLEASE HAVE SOME IDEAS FOR ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU ALL SEE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOON!

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Lmao this was my first fanfic- i got better at writing- I'll update it soon

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kosuek
#1
Chapter 3: this was a bit rushed
kosuek
#2
Chapter 2: this is a pretty good story. I would recommend skipping a line when someone new is speaking though
Yugyeomie97 #3
Chapter 6: I ing love this please continue
Charlot1081
767 streak #4
Chapter 5: I'm not good at cooking >.<' I can't even make instant oat meal. But, I can make darn good sandwiches!
Charlot1081
767 streak #5
Chapter 4: The story is rather interesting. You rush things a lot, but it's quite funny. It reminds me of when I was a beginner writer. You have a bright future~
Keep on writing! =^.^=
加油啊!