Chapter 1: I'm currently slamming my fist on the table bcuz no one ever believes me when I say MarkJinBum is a superior ship!! God, I've been deprived for so long, AO3 poly ship writers haven't updated the tag in a long time so this fic is heaven sent. This was so hot and well-written, and thank you for doing and spitroast and eating LMAO. They're great kinks but difficult to write beautifully. But more than that, I really want to say I enjoy the way you characterized them, and evened out the power dynamics. Often when I read fics, power dynamics in their trysts often are too polarized, but you made it overlap with their personalities, and it's not a black-and-white thing, i.e. being called baby or baby boy but not being a total subby bottom, or being a bottom but still being bossy and in charge. I really liked Mark's silent dominance, JB's overbearing vulgarity partnered with his need to please people, and most especially the duality in Jinyoung's personality. Also, MarkBum's friendship/relationship built on banter and trust. Aaaaahhh this is a lengthy comment but I'm just so happy to have read something so good in a long time. The is hot and filthy, but everything else really just is equally amazing.
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