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⇝ 𝔅𝔞𝔢𝔨𝔬𝔫𝔦𝔷𝔢𝔡 𝔈𝔤𝔤𝔶𝔢𝔬𝔩'𝔰 𝔖𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶 ℜ𝔢𝔳𝔦𝔢𝔴 𝔄𝔯𝔠𝔥𝔦𝔳𝔢 ⇜[CONTENTID1] is reading a review on a fic entitled: [/CONTENTID1]
[CONTENTID2] Sorry That i Loved You
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【 Introduction : 5/5 】
The description was good. Seeing as this was a one-shot for a contest and there were multiple prompts that helped create the idea for this story. I was always found prompts helpful, but only for short stories. I could never get hooked with a prompt to write a long story. I don't know why. I LOVE the poster. Primarymess makes amazing posters. I have a poster from her and it turned out to be one of the best! :) I love her animation skills. Also The Pearl: Graphics shop is awesome because three of my co-workers of this shop are also afilliated with The Pearl.
【 Basic Summary : 5/5 】
The little description was a good lead in into the story because that's exactly what Hanbin did. He hurt Hayi and he thought she'd take that? Boy was he wrong.
【 Plot : 17/20 】
To be honest, it's not the most original of plotlines and I'm sure this has happened more than once in a relationship. Where the ex-boyfriend broke up with the sweet natured girl because he couldn't keep his "magic" in his pants and he was rich, handsome and a ladies man. He goes either to a club, a bar, or wherever and is about to get with a gir
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