Chapter 1: This is really cute!!! And it's refreshing for me to see rollerskating in fanfiction tbh xD i love love love this kinda prompt and you did a very good job with this. Thanks aot for this!!?
Chapter 1: Darling,
To be completely honest, I read this piece of happiness on Monday, I just didn't write down my thoughts because I didn't have enough time :') Sorry for that. But now, I'm here and ready to compliment you.
You know, I crave for angst stories yet your fluff heart never fail to amaze me. First, I thought that Jinyoung will be cold and distant, but he surprisingly wasn't and my jaw touched the ground. He was sweet and lovely. A boy I truly wish will find you. (by accidental or fate)
Anyway, the clumsy yet talented girl is my favourite type so you bought me with everything. That's why I was sad when it was over. The end came so quickly. <3
Have a nice day xx
Chapter 1: Aww, this was so cute! I absolutely loved the idea of a roller derby (I know it was a request but it was a great idea nevertheless) because it's such a fun activity yet no one seems to write about it. Jinyoung was the perfect guy for this role, I don't even know who could have been better than him. :D I love how they always bumped into each other and the girl always wanted to say sorry. And this ending!!!! PERFECT!!! How he kissed her, so that she wouldn't apologise! Best first kiss ever!!!
All in all, I really enjoyed this story, so thank you for sharing it with us! <3
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