Chapter 19: Okay. I'll be ing frank. I've only read chapter 1, 2 and this one. Chapter 19. Your description wasn't bad. To me it was good even, only that the earlier chapters were too short & seemed to be no directions (uhh you understand what I say?). But.. the ending is actually pretty good. I think if you revamp this and make it to long one shot or two shots, it would be better. Don't give up, okay?
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