Hello.

My name is Park Jimin.

I'm 18 years old.

I go to your same school.

And you're the first person I've ever loved.

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peggyw #1 Oct 29, 2017 20:42:49

Chapter 19: Quite sad; I like the chapter length- it fits the tone

souremma #2 Oct 29, 2017 01:07:21

Chapter 19: I'm not gonna lie, this has me crying

Eungi_ ^{32 streak} #3 Oct 27, 2017 18:19:51

Chapter 19: Okay. I'll be ing frank. I've only read chapter 1, 2 and this one. Chapter 19. Your description wasn't bad. To me it was good even, only that the earlier chapters were too short & seemed to be no directions (uhh you understand what I say?). But.. the ending is actually pretty good. I think if you revamp this and make it to long one shot or two shots, it would be better. Don't give up, okay?