Six Days

The Depths of Reason
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FIVE YEARS LATER

 

The cold wind blowing in from the East was a firm reminder that winter was on it's way, and that Amber needed to arrive at her destination before it came. Foreigners might think that Obarsan was a continent made up of a dry desert, but her home was to the North. In the mountainous forests there, snow fell cold enough to discourage even the most intrepid of travelers. Even though she had spent the last five years away from her village, she was not wanting to spend any more time away.

A heavy sigh escaped her lips as she reached up to brush a strand of dark hair back behind her ear. Her leather gloves, suitable for riding and for handling a weapon, were not very suited to tasks such as hair and she fumbled for a moment before the lock actually stayed. She could have simply removed her glove, except that she was still on payroll and it was part of her uniform. She had given up on her ideas of revenge years ago now and had been working as a caravan guard, using her considerable skill with her funny sword to protect merchants and travellers from the slavers that roamed the wilds.

One last run, she promised herself, determined that after escorting this caravan to the crossroads, she would take her leave and her pay there and move on North. A slight smile crossed her thin lips as she thought of Jinhee, the man who had practically raised her since she was thirteen years old. She had not seen him in the time that she had been away and she was looking forward to the coming reunion. She was finally willing to admit what he had known all along and tried to warn her of: her quest for revenge was in folly. She hadn't received the strange weapon she still carried because of some god's will, but by dumb luck. The odd sword was not an omen of great things but instead, an omen of great folly. She was ready to admit that now, and more than ready to return home.

And yet, to get home was to brave the dangerous Obari countryside alone. She had tried to find a caravan to take her all the way to her home, but none were roaming so far North in this time of year. As such, she had to settle for halfway, and when they turned to the West to head through the Needle Gate, she would continue North alone. She wasn't looking forward to that, and yet, it was unavoidable unless she wanted to wait out the winter before trying to go home. That might be the thing to do, but it wasn't what she wanted.

Footsteps and a man's voice caught her attention and pulled her away from her thoughts and back to the here and now. Of average height and with a sharp, square jaw, Jinyoung didn't look like much to the eye, and yet he was a shrewd businessman. Amber had worked for him several times in the past running goods all over Obarsan, and it was only because of their past connections that he was willing to take a guard only halfway. Usually one had to sign a contract that promised they would guard the caravan from one city to another. 

Jinyoung bowed to the woman he had been speaking with, a woman with dark skin that gave Amber a curious look. She dismissed her as what she was - a mere guard - and turned to Jinyoung once more. "Be safe on your travels," she intoned, the formal goodbye for Obari smoothly falling from her tongue in a honey-like tone. It was proper to wish someone safety: the ways were so dangerous that one never knew when they would see a person again.

And yet Jinyoung's face broke into an easy smile. "Her blessing on you," he said in return, giving another bow before hurrying back to Amber. He took the reins of his horse from her and mounted quickly without a word, leaving Amber to swing into her own saddle. He did a least wait until she was atop her horse Stoutheart before he took off, but he set a quick pace through the packed city streets. Jabar was never still, a city that was filled to the brim and overflowing with life and trade. The people moved out of their way easily and without too much bother: they were used to riders coming through without a care for the pedestrians about them. Amber had once seen a man run over by a rider who didn't even glance back even as the man howled in pain.

She was glad when they reached the caravan where it waited just inside the city gates. The morning sun was already high in the sky and climbing, signalling their late start, but Jinyoung had insisted on visiting the woman first. It wasn't Amber's business to know why, it was merely her job to protect him, and so she asked no questions even though she found it odd. Especially his final words to the woman, but that wasn't her concern.

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#1
Chapter 15: WHAT THE...!? Okay I was not expecting ALOT of stuff in this epilogue. Firstly, Jinwoo lied! How could he do that to Amber? >:{
Yeah, I guess his loyalty is first and foremost with the Tower. Next, he really thinks that bringing back the dragon eggs will be a good idea? Yeah, I agree with him that it was wrong to get rid of an entire race, especially one that's so majestic and elegant like the dragons -- but that also means he went against orders. So he's not entirely loyal? LIKE WHAT!?
And third -- WHAT!!!? How did they find him? The Emperor MUST have rogue Magicians on his side. There can't be any other way that he is found. Not to mention, that no-good Emperor will not only have his dirty hands on the godslaying spear, but also on the last remaining dragon eggs, dammit. And if he DOES have a Magician by his side, then that means he will break that flipping Seal that Amber and Jinwoo worked so hard to create! >:{{{

I feel all empty inside, even more than before. On the other hand, I love the Calceryn series. I think the Obarsan stories are my favourite from the lot. It's a continent where alot of stuff happens. Maybe I should go back to read Cerdin's Cairn again?? But I'm not sure if that will give me any answers. Like is that murderer in the end Himchan? I could be wrong! I'm left here begging for more D:
That aside, that was superb storytelling, amazing descriptions and a well-thought out magic system. Another gem in the making, Tigress.

(Promise, here I come!)
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#2
Chapter 13: I feel so empty :(( Maybe because a part of me knew that they would never happen? I mean, Jinwoo is a Magician, the Tower will most likely assign him other missions when he comes back. And Amber really needs to get back home, and return to a life where she doesn't have to watch her back for once.
The spear-sword thing getting lost reminds of the legends again. Maybe a new hero will come in the future, and the weapon will reveal itself to them! Amber's purpose was really to help Jinwoo and now her part is done . :(
As for the Tower, I will mention that I'm beginning to like them less and less...It's like they're keeping the dragons there for a future war or something. I thought they really were going to Depths of Reason for the greater good -- but really that's just Jinwoo's POV. It appears to me that the Tower is more political than I first assumed.
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#3
Chapter 12: Really Amber??? There was no love involved? ;) I feel like if she asked Jinwoo, he would give her a different answer -- he just seems to be the sort of person who would be a bit more emotional than her. In any case, I'm a bit excited to know where this will go, because our heroes have finally found the Depths of Reason. I'm also happy that you wrote Amber as being the wiser one in this situation and figuring out the area was the Depths of Reason before Jinwoo! In your face, Magician xD


Damn, that Answar dude has all his cards set in the right place. Hundreds and hundreds of eggs? Now he's being too greedy xD Hahah. Btw, I really like this guy even though we never get to see him in action as readers. He's such a good villain (or antagonist in this case since we are only introduced to him via Amber and Jinwoo's POVs). The ending fight there is intense. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for Amber to survive!
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#4
Chapter 11: DAYYUM, my man Jinwoo! Go for it XDD Lol, I forgot what I was going to write because of that ending hahah. I suppose their little conversations are so genuine and lovely. I think Amber missed out on that -- talking with a guy close to her age and about normal things like dreams of the future and fears from their past. It definitely built up the tension for that romantic ending ;)
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#5
Chapter 10: The burial was very sad. I'm glad I didn't get too attached to the other caravaners because then I'd be bawling right now. Jinyoung's demise came as a bit of a shock, with him gone, will that stop the other caravaners from hunting down Jinwoo? Technically speaking, Jinwoo is no longer under Jinyoung's contract for protection -- they could hunt him down for what he did. Hopefully, they will respect Amber's decision in aiding him and leave them alone.



Jinwoo speaking of the dragons has me double minded. I thought the Tower was good, but reading over this now, the dragons are just another creature that lacks a conscience to our level. Eliminating dragons isn't going to solve the Tower's problem -- their actual problem lies with the people who want to exploit the dragons . Besides, with the dragon's gone, I'm sure these perpetrators will find another means by which to carry out their plans!

But Amber's words are heavy about the consequences. War really is a place full of tough choices. :((
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#6
Chapter 9: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1284145/9'>Three and Thirty</a></span>
Is Jinwoo being playful with Amber up there? Harr harr, I see what you did there ;))

Anyways, back to the action, my heart was beating louder than Amber's when I read that the dragons were approaching. I forgot that Jinwoo unleashing his powers in the sandstorm would send a signal out to people who are after him. And to think it was the dragon people themselves -- that caught me off guard. I expected raiders or some other hooligans but not the Emperor's soldiers! Yikes D:



HOLY MOLY that was some insane writing, I truly enjoyed reading how Jinwoo used his powers, to Amber's breathtaking fighting abilities. She's so good that it hurts! I love female characters that are good in sword fighting T.T The way the riders use the dragons is very interesting. Do they also put them under a spell? I'm in awe -- and what did Jinwoo do with that dragon in the end!? I'm going for 2 suggestions, either he's breaking them out of Answar's spell/magic, or he's putting on a spell instead.
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#7
Chapter 8: Jinwoo is giving me the creeps now. I suppose having so much power is really a frightening thing for someone who has no magical capabilities. For sure, I'm also a bit curious about Jinyoung -- I thought he was a regular guard but now I'm curious.
Wow, Amber's sword O_o I don't know what to say. I love how the loose ends are finally coming together.
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#8
Chapter 7: I laughed when Amber asked Jinwoo if hitting him enchanted her xD That was a bit funny. Anyways, I do agree that he seems as harmless as a kitten, but it's still a bit weary trying to hobble around a Magician. I mean, he can read minds O_o
Now, I'm trying to make parallels with Taekwoon's ability from Cursed and The Blood Towers, but if I'm correct, is there a fourth form of magic (which I presumed was talking to animals?) -- but Jinwoo can do that already it seems. I wonder who is actually stronger in terms of tapping into magic: Jinwoo or Taekwoon?

I feel like Amber is no longer the main character in the story. She is like the reader now, a spectator of something greater -- the war between the emperor with the dragons and the Magicians. Onwards!
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#9
Chapter 6: I really like the Magicians ;_; They sort of remind me of the Aes Sedai but to them, they are going out there for the greater good. The Aes Sedai were just manipulative women who wanted to control the politics in the world. Well, I wonder if Amber will consider joining Jinwoo for his cause because he is essentially ending the task that she wanted to start years ago.
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#10
Chapter 5: My suspicions are CONFIRMED! I really like the subtle hints you left about Jinwoo's true identity before. also, I'm very surprised as I thought he was hiding it but it turns out everyone bar Amber knows who he is. Now I'm REALLY curious as to why he is here, and if he wants to find something in the ancient city.
Man, the quote from FF Type 0 makes me feel very sad and with remorse because this story was made for my contest and then I left the site due to personal problems :( I'm so glad you didn't stop writing this because it's a masterpiece! I love the writing, the descriptions and dare I say, Jinwoo is suddenly y now HAHA because a man with magic is an attractive man to me xD

Time to brace myself for the imminent battle he mentioned! I wonder who could be after him.