Changmin's one shot.

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You are a star, I am just the star gazer. I can look at you all I want but never to touch you."

 

A story about two people from different backgrounds, living different lives. One day their path crossed and their whole life was turned upside down.

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babycatz
#1
ah ya, she's just too innocent to do that 'thing', haha. but hey, she's 21 hahaha.
she scolded changmin but changmin scolding back, and vice versa. and idk but some dialogue comes to my mind, like :

SH : Oppa, based on...
CM : No, it was just an unbelievable article. just writer's pov
SH : no, it's been implemented and has good testimonial
CM : yes, but TECHNICALLY..
SH : just to say matter-of-factly...
CM : but from what i read from this book...blablabla

and the words : basically, technically, etc would like to pop up on their conversation. Two extreme nagger maknaes and their intellectual conversation. *sigh
jaesicawarrior
#2
@babycatz

Awwww. I love maknae pairing! But I kinda ship Seokyu or Yongseo. And moreover, I cant really imagine Seohyun sleeping with someone on their first encounter. She's to.. how should I put this in words? Innocent and too upright to be doing such a thing. Not that I'm saying Jessie isnt but you get my point right? ^^

P/s: If it were Seohyun. I think she'll give Changmin a good long lecture the whole night than comforting him in any other way. Keke
babycatz
#3
uhm okay, at first when i read the letter, 'J'?
i was like.. who is it?
but because i ship changmin and seohyun, so J for Joohyun (Seo Joohyun) popped in my mind. in the end, i was wrong haha

it's all up to you whether to make the sequel or not. but personally i like the story to this point, yeah i just try to be honest. never mind my comment, ne?
FolderName
#4
this is good :) and to be honest i cant also think of the girl as Soo LoL and i'm also JaeSica with ChangSoo shipper ^^
jaesicawarrior
#5
Thank you~~ I've made the sequel. /and fixed the link, Oh god, Aff is giving me headaches. Anyway, just click the link to get to the sequel. Thanks for reading ^^
akane-
#6
Awe, it's so sweet..and yes, please write more! I really want to know more, Changmin needs to meet his child! >< Please update soon, you're a really good author ^_^
jaesicawarrior
#7
Leave some comments if you like how the story is going okay. Just to make sure that I'm not making the wrong decision to make this into a full story ㅠ_ㅠ
eidiki_angelos1901 #8
this story is so amazing!!! \O/ but please do make a sequel dear!! please...? ^^
jaesicawarrior
#9
Maybe I will if I got the idea to make the sequel. Thank you fr reading~ ^^
gwiyeounjiyeon #10
PLEASE ! i am begging you to please put up a sequel :(<br />
this is beautiful ♥