*FLAILS*

Chapter 1: I love the plot, I'd like to keep reading...but the grammar keeps me off.

Chapter 1: i cried;;;;;;

Chapter 1: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Chapter 1: AND LOOK AT MY FIRST COMMENT IT WAS SO INNOCENT IT WAS WAITING FOR A CUTE FLUFFY COLORFUL YOONMIN FANFIC BUT WE WERE PROVIDED WITH A STORY THAT ACTUALLY JERKED TEARS OUT OF MY EYES. M Y EYES. I NEVER CRY. I HAVEN'T CRIED EVER SINCE LIKE JUNE (yes I counted) IF U FEEL LIKE WRITING WRITE A SEQUEL CAUSE WITH THE STORY ENDING LIKE THIS IS U N A C C E P T A B L E . uNaCcEpTaBlE. UnAcCePtAbLe.

Chapter 1: I AM LITERALLY CRYING NO LIE LIKE LITERALLY NO LIE I KNOW IT MIGHT SEEM LIKE I'M JUST SAYING THAT TO BE FUNNY OR TO BE FIGURATIVELY SPEAKING BUT I ACTUALLY CRIED. I always say that comment and my eyes slightly water up and they don't even touch anywhere around my eye, but it's different when you aCTUALLY CRY like I WAS SURPRISE AT MYSELF I CRIED FOR 5 MINS STRAIGHT THAT MIGHT NOT SEEM LIKE A LOT BUT IT WAS A LOT MORE THAN I USUALLY DO IT WAS FULL-ON SNOT-FILLED TEAR-FILLED CRYING I ACTUALLY KEPT READING THE LAST FEW LINES AND CRYING EVEN MORE I WAS BAWLING INTO MY MOM'S PILLOW I HOPE SHE'S NOT MAD I ACTUALLY HAD TO TAKE A SECOND TO SIGH AND CALM MYSELF DOWN BUT EVEN THEN I WAS CHOKING BEFORE I FINALLY CALMED MYSELF DOWN AFTER SO LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
bUT ANYWAY IF YOU FEEL LIKE WRITING MAKE A SEQUEL IT CAN'T JUST END LIKE THIS IT CAN'T IT CAN'T IT JUST C A N 'T ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 ! ONLY HAPPY ENDINGS ARE ALLOWED

Chapter 1: skdklakflslsl YOU WHAT HAVE YOU DONE NOW I'M SO STRESSED RN THIS WASN'T HOW IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE DAMN

Chapter 1: Jdhehsksbusnalshdbfksnsvd what have you done author-nim whyyyy my heartu...... Whyyyyyyyy.....
It's amazing and heartbreaking at the same time ghad

Chapter 1: this is not ok
Im not ok
Pls someone i need a hug TT_TT

I havent even read divergent and i feel extremely spoiled even though im confused but im feeling these emotions and ItS nOT oK