Sacrifice

Description

A painful love story.

Foreword

 

I stood there silently, staring out at the pouring rain. Ah… It’s raining again. That’s when my past painful memories strike me again. I took a deep breath, wipe away my fallen tears, and turn around into that horrible place.

Laying down a bouquet of lilies, I held back my tears and managed to force out a smile. “Hey… It has been awhile…”

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Hello! This is my first time writing a fic, please be nice to me ^-^ Feel free to comment and point out my mistakes! But don't be too harsh :B Thank you! Hope to hear from you all soon~

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mefika
#1
read for 2nd time..but still..sob2..
yong89
#2
TTTT i'm cryingggg
sobs why hyemi die??
wae??
aiggoo TT nice story~~ ^^
Potataem
#3
So it's not a happy ending~~~

CONGRATS! YOU'VE WRITTEN A NICE, SHORT STORY!
kaejis
#4
no! she died. no happy ever after. but i guess that is better. cause all the fanfics i be reading be giving only happy endings..
kaejis
#5
and no it's not obvious. it's just i read a lot of fanfictions that i can probably guess. lol. i do that with a lot of the other fanfics i read. or it's also because i watched a lot of dramas to predict. lol.
yong89
#6
aigoo ㅠㅠ that was a heart attack. why should hyemi die????
Potataem
#7
LOLOLOLOLOL~

You can't make Junhyung die..
Hahaha
Anyway this chapter is daebak!!!

So sad... I wonder what will happen next???
Maybe Junhyung met another girl, her face is just same like Hyemi???

-Just my imagination lol~
kaejis
#8
i bet it was her who got hit......
Potataem
#9
OH MY GOD!!!<br />
<br />
What happened to him? Accident??? <br />
<br />
. . . Pity him....
yong89
#10
Yah! -_- i want more~ please :3