Chapter 1: Agree with the comment down there.. I hope there some more with them accidently meet like they talked about. Or maybe somehow got together again. After a lot of turn in life.

Chapter 1: That was so sad!! The plot was great. I really liked it! One thing that I can give as advice is read more and write more, and read actual stories from famous authors. They will help you with grammar issues and make you a better writer. That's what I did, and trust me, I'm still learning to write myself. That one big paragraph of yours could've been broken up into smaller paragraphs. Keep writing and reading and you'll be great!!