Chapter 2: Still crying over this

Chapter 2: This was beautiful omg. This was so well written and detailed. I really liked I hope you write more in the future.

Chapter 2: This kinda new for me to read you know. How graphic this chapters are and hiw different it is from all the napink story ive read but all in all it was greaaaat!

Chapter 2: I'm looking forward to Jieqiong's pov, this is really beautifully written :)

Chapter 1: This is really pretty.
Pretty and painful in the same time.
Im in dilemma whether to ask you to write sequel or not.
While it is really good stand on its own.

This was written beautifully and I'm so in love with this fic.

The way you wrote this piece was just gorgeous. The imagery, the emotions is just...wow. From the word prose, to the simple sentences, to the emotional gut punches, all packed up in one tight story. There wasn't a single 'useless' or necessary line or word, everything was just enough to deliver the punch, and boy did you deliver. At first I thought we were going the happy route, and all the pink imagery was pleasant and fluffy, and light, and then the shadows start creeping in, and it's gradual, the change in tone isn't immediate, so there's no emotional whiplash, but there's that sense of foreboding like 'oh my god, it's going this way, why is it going this way? can't we be happy T.T'. Loved the 'black' parts too, it was so intense at the end i think i was holding my breath at some point. It's a beautiful piece, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it xD

i've read this while listening to 5 seconds of summer's san francisco... i cant.

Chapter 1: omg that was so good :D tysm for writing this!

Chapter 1: Such as gold piece of works, filled with dust of love turning to wavering of itself and heart wrenching, it should be divulge that it was napink's pieces of damn story, yet so beautiful with so well-written :'''')))
I'm dying to know Jieqiong's POV, if that's possible? ^^